Third times a charm (on hold for now)

Third times a charm

Hello everyone, so I'm writing a short story.

Sneak peeks from a few chapters:

Sneak peek 1)

"Big bwother? Ricky?"she called.

But all that greeted her was silence.

She ran downstairs and towards the kitchen where the light was on, but he wasnt there.

'Where is he?' she thought getting scared.

She walked towards the Lounge as her mommy called it, but then stopped when she felt a cold wind come towards her.

She looked towards her right where the front door was wide open and cold air was coming inside.

It was dark outside but she wasnt scared, Ricky had promised her that he'd protect her from everything.

She went outside and saw that Rickys car wasn't there so she sat down on the steps waiting.

She shivered when she felt cold wind envelope her and bit her lip, pushing her long black hair behind her ears.

Her blue eyes were wide, fear filling them.

But, she sat there, she knew he'd come back, he'd promised he'd always be there to fight the monsters away.

Sneak peek 2)

"Oui, je suis très. Bien," i murmured but loud enough so he could hear.

(TRANSLTION: 'Yes, I'm fine. Thanks')

Green eyes let out a chuckle and my eyes snapped to him.

Scowling i asked him," ce qui est avec vous?"

(TRANSLATION; 'what is with you?')

"Ne mettez pas en place une façade," he said stepping forward.

(TRANSLATION; 'dont put up a facade')

I rolled my eyes at him.

'Who is he? My father?' My conscience sarcastically thought.

I bent on my knees and ankles, not taking my eyes of the man in front of me.

I grabbed my stuff and gave one last glance making sure nothing was left before standing up.

I huffed and walked away from the tree after picking up my stuff.

I walked until i stood in front of him.

"Êtes-vous bien que?" he asked getting serious.

(TRANSLATION; 'are you alright though?')

He came forward and I took a step back.

"Je ne vais pas vous faire de mal," he said calmly,"Je suis alexander mais appelez-moi alex."

(TRANSLATION; 'I wont hurt you' and 'my name is Alexander but call me Alex')

I gave him a brief nod before taking a step towards him.

"Je suis Elizabeth mais appelez-moi Eliza," I replied.

(TRANSLATION; 'my name is Elizabeth but call me Eliza')

SNEAK PEEKS OVER

This story is actually off a dream I had although many things are different the story line is still the same...

Basically I hope you guys like it... if you wanna correct my grammar or punctuation, comment and ill correct it.

So I hope y'all enjoy (gosh I love southern accents so much)

Just for the record, the book will be edited once its finished but please tell me if there is something wrong with it and if I can improve it... :D

I will be editing it every now and then but the finished edited piece will be after completing the book :)

~Kash