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Author: DisneyChick17

Genre: Fantasy

Cover: The cover, yeah I guess it's a picture of her, but gives no clue about what type of book it is and if someone is looking for a fantasy book they'll most likely skip over it cause it doesn't look like a fantasy book, it looks more like a realistic type of book.

Title: It works, not really too much to say really.

Content: It was okay from what I read.

Grammar: Now this is where you struggled you mixec words up here and there, simple words even like 'a' and 'an', there were others to but I can't remember right now. You're sentence structure spelling all of it needs work.

Overall score: 6/10

It was difficult for me to read, like really difficult, your idea was good, but your grammar and everything wasn't. Work on that and it'll be a lot better.

P.S. sorry it's late, I would have gotten it done last weekend if it weren't for the fact of my party. So sorry again

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