Battle of the fusions(discontinued )

Part 1:Gogeta

In an alternate time after the battle with janemba something happened to Gogeta (Goku/Vegeta) causing them to be stuck in that form and it has already had been 30 minutes.        Gogeta p.o.v.                                                           What the hell?how come I'm not unfusing?"  I wondered as I tried to unfuse. "DAMN!!!its no use i'm stuck in this form.....permanently"I teleported out of hell and I'm back on earth"it feels great to back on earth once again.huh"I turn around to see a man in a dark cloak looking at me and he rise his hand looking like he was going to attack me so I jump after him and he stops me and freezes me in place"what The hell did u...do bastard"the man says no worries...fusion u will be there soon. THE HELL DO YOU MEAN"as I said that I was teleported to a battle arena on a different planet. The man unfreeze me"huh where are we"the man did not answer"tell me where am I."the man still did not answer"ANSWER ME!!"the man turns around towards me and says we are on fusion battle planet."huh?!? But I'm the only fusion. " No he says you are not and he points towards a group of people and I look over there."                                                          

Gotenks the fusion between goten and trunks.    

Vegito the fusion between Vegeta and Goku.       

And Gohanks the fusion between gohan and trunks.                                                                             Vegito walks up and says now that he's here we can start.am I correct?"The man in the dark hoodie nodded and he raised his hand up and a flash of light came out of his hand as he said".    let the match BEGIN!!"                                             So guys itsYoBoiGoku here and this is my first book that i've ever written so if it has some mistakes it's because of that and I'm getting help from One of my friends who is a very well known Book writer on what pad I just want to see your opinions and what do I need to work on the story.