Editing!

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Going back over the story with a fine-tooth comb, I have realised that it is in need of a MAJOR re-wtite. I won't delete it until the revised version is finished, but it will be changed.
Thanks for reading it anyway despite its many errors! (Apparently when you upload a story to publish it doesn't keep the paragraph sections, italics or sentencing. Who'd have thunk?)

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