Commander Comet Vol 1

Commander Comet VOL 1

Part 1 The most powerful man in the world

Written by SuperT729

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"Hello my name is Robert Patterson and i'm a janitor at a ice rink and a superhero that happens to be the most powerful being on the planet, I mean I can fly through suns and throw planets and stuff, I wear a half mask and a cape and also have a purple spiral emblem on my chest but I wasn't born this way I was a normal guy until I won a contest . I won a trip on an experimental spacecraft that was supposed to circle the moon and come back in a day but it was hit with a solar flare on the return trip and there was a bright flash and I was sucked out of the ship. When I woke up I was back on earth in a crater in the ground and I could fly among other things like shoot energy from my hands and have unrealistic strength and durability I decided to use my powers to save people mainly because i'm a comic book fan' and become a superhero. ̈

San Francisco May 8th 2017

Commander Comet flew across the San Francisco skyline as his cape flapped in the wind, the sun beat down with intense heat but was canceled out by a cool breeze. His bright white suit glowed in the california sun as he flew effortlessly in the air. Commander Comet flew past buildings he watched window washers wave at him and he waved back, the streets screamed with joy when he flew by the people loved him he was there champion.This world had many heros like Tyron,Court Marshal,Hyconius,The Hacker and many others but none of them were as loved by the people as Commander Comet.Commander Comet was the most famous person on the planet and the funny thing was no one knew who he was under the mask. The truth was he was a normal guy that was a ice rink janitor. Commander Comet flew to the police headquarters as he did every thursday he looked up and saw the police commissioner waiting for him. "Hey what's the story this week commissioner?" Commander Comet asked "Pretty quiet if you were looking for a city to save you should have picked detroit, I saw that you were in New York a little over a week ago I didn't know you were buddies with that guy in the black suit with the sword" the commissioner said "Yeah I met him a while back he seems like a brooding vigilante but Tyron is a nice guy once you get to know him". Then all the lights in the city went out and a loud voice stretched over the city. "I am searching for the man known as Commander Comet he can find me on top of the transamerica pyramid I am asking nicely and don't make me ask again" The lights came back on and the voice stopped. Commander Comet immediately took of with a loud crackle and a boom with the shockwave that followed him. Commander Comet reached the building to see a man in a black version of his suit but the spiral was replaced by a red crescent. The man turned around "Ah so you're the one they call Commander Comet,you're the one that the people love you're the one that escaped YOUR the one that became a hero. "Who are you? Commander Comet asked My name was Abraham Conshev I was a russian cosmonaut in the nineteen sixties I was test piloting a new shuttle years ahead of its time but my ship was hit by a solar flare very similar to yours but when the flare hit the ships uranium core was overloaded launching me into a black hole once I was inside the ship was shredded to pieces......but I wasn't I sat in a black and cold void for fifty years I never aged I never heard anything or saw anything or smelled anything the only thing I could feel was the piercing cold the ran through my body for so long". "Oh my god it's a miracle you survived i'm so sorry" Commander Comet said in a concerned voice "DON'T BE ! I DON'T WANT YOUR PITY I WISH I DIDN'T LIVE!!!!......" The man in black said in rage and then he slid down and sat on the roof beneath him "There was a bright light and I was launched into space all I remember is the spinning until I felt warm for the first time in years I passed through the earth's atmosphere and landed off the coast of Africa .All I wanted to do was get home that's when I discovered I could fly" The man said with a smirk on his face. "I made my way home and found my family my daughter looked older than me........." He began to sob "My daughter immediately recognized me.....she ran out of her house to me she wrapped her arms around me crying in joy but when I did the same I just heard a snap..... she was gone before I knew what happened....I killed my only daughter with super strength I didn't know I had. The police came......they shot at me they were afraid.. the bullets ricocheted off me and hit them killing one injuring the other two. I realized that i'm to dangerous to be alive and that's when I decide to end it all....I went to a bar for a last drink and that's when I saw you on the TV the man like me the man with the power to destroy the world and that's when I knew." "Knew what ?" Commander Comet asked . The man in black looked up .