avni's pain

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This is my first os, hope you like it.

The lines in black colour are for what Author is thinking and speaking, # # colour ones are for song.

Note: avni gets her periods in this os.

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Author's POV

In night around 12 am(this os takes place after avneil's marriage, after they had shifted in new khanna mansion and before sending dayawanti Mehta jail)

The scene starts in avni and neel's room, neel is sitting on the couch and working on the laptop, while after finishing her novel, avni gets up from the bed to go to the dressing table to get a hand cream.

When she is walking, suddenly avni feels unbearable pain. Avni clutches her stomach and falls on her knees, and cries of pain escapes her mouth, her head bends forward till it reaches the floor. It happens very quickly, and neel doesn't get enough time to react. While avni is continuously cursing her unexpected guest, her period, which doesn't even tell her beforehand before coming, usually due to her pms she used to get prepared at least, expect this time. As soon as he sees avni's head down he gets up and runs to her, but she collapses on the floor and is lying on the floor on her side and wails. Neel gets very scared seeing avni's wails. Neel sit on his knee by her side, he asks "avni what happened tell me please, you are freaking me out". But avni ignores him due to her pain. When he is about to touch her to hold her and carry her, avni shouts "DONT TOUCH ME". Neel don't know how to react, what to do, here avni is crying and also shouting. These two emotions are confusing neel in addition with her condition. He gets up and calls neela ma thinking only she can help him right now.

Neela ma picks the call after few rings.

Neel says "hello neela ma" his voice is full of tension

Neela ma sensed his tension behind his voice and says" what happened neel, is everything alright, why you called at this odd hour, neel say something you are scaring me"

Neel says "neela ma, actually avni"

Neela cuts in between and says "what happened to avni, is she alright, neel, I am asking you something"

Neel says" I don't know"

Neela says "what do you mean by you don't know neel"

Neel says "ma, actually avni is crying in pain, I don't know what happened, she was perfectly fine sometime ago and now lying on the floor and crying. She is not letting me touch her so that I can carry her to the bed. I don't know what to do neela ma" his voice is shaking as if he is on the verge of crying.

Neela knew what has happened to avni, she says with confidence "neel don't worry, just listen to me very carefully and do as I say"

Neel says "tell me ma" listening to neela, neel gained confidence

Neela says "neel, first find avni's clutch, that golden one," he runs to the cupboard, opens it and finds the clutch and says "now what ma"

Neela says "open it, there you will find two tablets strips, you have to give avni these two tablets with warm water, okay"

Neel says "I got it ma, you stay on line, while I get the water"

Neela says "okay"

Neel takes out the tablet strips and places it with the clutch on the table, and then he goes out of the room to get warm water from kitchen.

Neel comes after few minutes, as soon as he comes in the room; he is welcomed with low screams and sobs. He gets hurt hearing avni, he is not able to see her pain; he picks up the phone and says "yes ma, I have got warm water."

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