hi my name is scrat has the scrat in ice age. i have fun here in colorado all the time.
i get pade one time a week and not frome alowence i am a guvermint spy and i am looking for a a spy in californa i dont know what she looks like or eny thang i just want to tell one person just one. ok i am going to tell my aunt that i am a spy. i get in my car and i head to here house then my phone rings brennng brennng i ancer saying thes is scrat. "dont do it" um hwo is thes "dont go to pams house or you will diy. agen hwo the heak is thes or i am going to call the cops. then he hang up i stop about a blok a head and i get out my revolver silenced i jop to roof to roof then i se my aunt house and i look a round i dont see eny thang out of the ordanary the i jump to the ground then pop i herd a gun shot.
i run to the back yard and the pop pop pop pop i get doun on the grass trying two shoot the spuy but i could knot het him i ges i was nerves or sumthing i get in the house and i head two the frount door thank gosh he did knot see me the pop i shot hem doun. thte is wen my ant pam cam running up the staeres. o no we have two go then i put my gun a way a told here she dos not have to go eny were that it is ok. then she sead did you not here the gun shots go off we need to go now. then i told here two seat doun and i expland two here what i do for a living and she did not beleve me then i showd here my bage and gun ishowed here my chek and then she sead i belev you gabe.
ok but we dont have much time we have to go you dont have time to get all yere thangs.
well why not. the x spy is on here way and we ned two go a soon a posebul
geve me feed back how did i do what can i fex next time how to do better thank you