One day you're going to walk in my house, coming to apologize but what you see will shock you. I'll be on the bathroom floor. Blood dripping from my wrist. And right beside me with be a note saying how much I loved you and how much you have hurt me. It will explain how you were the first person that made me feel like I was something then you left. At the bottom of the note it will say "I love you, goodbye".
At this point you have tears running down your face. You're screaming with my dead body in your arms. You're screaming for me to not leave you. To come back. But it's too late. You left and now I'm dead.
At my funeral everyone cries, looking at you. My family saw the letter too. My friends even saw the letter. But they don't see the cuts on your wrist. They don't notice the dark circles under your eyes. You regret leaving everyday and you can't get the image of my bleeding wrist out of your head. Then one day you can't take it anymore. You love me too much to live without me. You do the same thing I do. But this time the note says "I'll be with her forever now".Tell me how you feel about this one. Should I write more like this?