sorry for the short chapter before but making the POV of a drunk four is hard because he is hallways so serious and is only drunk once in the real book once.
Tris POV
Tobias was kissing Lauren! I guess he never really liked me. Christina sees them kissing and says "cmon tris, lets show Lauren that-" Christina was going to say something but Will walks over and grabs her by the hips. I know it wasn't his intention to interrupt but I felt a little mad at him. they run off together. i see Tobias turn around and he imediatly runs toward me. I try to run as fast as I can but he is too fast. he soon catches up to me. "tris, bayyybyyyy...please... I only want you to tickle my tounge... not... Lauren... she is a um a what do you call someone.. who tricks you I to thinking that they have beer...in their mouths?" I know he is drunk and that is why he kissed her. but a sensation in my head tells me otherwise. he tries to lean in and kiss me but I just stand there. I have to wait until he is sober to be sure that he is kissing me because he likes me for real. I shake his hand and head towards the pit. I did not want to go the I initiates dormitory because peter was probably there and I did not want to deal with him right now.
when I arrive at the pit, Marlene skips up to me and says. "hey tris! I haven't seen you in a while. I needed someone like Marlene right now so I could calm down a bit. we hanged out in the pit until curfew. I did not want to see Tobias.
I couldn't fall asleep so I got up and walked around. I saw Tobias approaching and he seemed more close to sober than he had before. I approached him cautiously. He stared at me with his big brown eyes and I could not help but kiss him. we had a whole make out session in the hall. His touge demanded to enter my mouth but I wouldn't let him. Finnaly, I gave up and let his tounge touch mine, He played around with it. He started to reach for the bottom of my shirt and tried to pull it off but I pushed his hands away and said, "four, we can not do this! not here and defiantly not know! I am going back to the dormitory know." he grabed my arm as I started to turn around and said, "listen. I am sorry about what happened. there is nothing between my and Lauren, I love you!" "love is a really strong word." I say back "I know. and I do not care if the whole world hears it! Tris prior, I love you." I start to kiss him, but this time, we kiss shorter than before. We know we have to go back because we will get caught. we reluctantly let go of each other, and I head towards my dormitory.
but I can't sleep. the whole time I lie awake thinking of what Tobias is doing right know. I think of when his lips touched mine, and when he tried to pull of my shirt, and when he apologized, with his deep brown eyes staring into my soul.
after a while, I close my eyes for what seems like five minutes and Chris come running to my bed to wake me up.
"Wake up sleepy head!!" "Uuuuuuuuuggg" I groan
she throws a pillow at my face and I get up and throw it back at her. Next thing you know we are having one of those girly pillow fights!
but of course, party pooper peter had to come over and make one of his snarly remarks! he always ruins the fun. " What's your problem man!" Chris says "My problem is that you got me kicked out of Zeke's apartment yesterday, and made me look bad." he responds " I didn't make you look like anything, you did that all on your own. That must be the biggest accomplishment you've made since we got here" she snaps back " Says the pansycake who backed down on a fight!" he murmurs loudly enough so that everyone surrounding us can hear. I knew this was soon going to turn into another episode of Christina vs. Peter, so I whispered into Christina's ear "C'mon, he is not worth the fight, let's just go get some breakfast to eat. He wants you to get mad and fight with him, don't let him win" she nods briefly. She gives peter one last mean look and walks away. I follow behind her.
As I walk I to the pit, I see Tobias in one of the tables ahead of us, and I think he winked at me but I am not sure. A shiver goes down my spine and I can't help but smiling "um Tris, are you okay? you are kind of freaking me out with that weird smile." Christina says. I playfully five her a poke in the ribs with my elbow, and she shoves me back with her shoulder.
As we begin to take our seats at a table, Peter walks over and whispers in my ear, " I know about you and Tobias."
AUTHORS NOTE
okay guys, I know I sort of changed this part of the book a lot, but I just thought this plot twist would be great
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