"I love u......" part 8

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Any mistakes.....sorry.......

This is an emotional part....I hope you guys like it lets see.....if you guys are not on with it....no problem u will change this part.....ok....no worries....

So let's start......

"This is UNBELIEVABLE...." San said..

Rag looks at him strangely......

"What???"

"How could you???" He don't know what to say.....he was shocked.....too core.....

"Hello....excuse me it's none of your business......it's my mistake....I should not talk to much...with STRANGERS...."
Rag said......

Next moment she was pinned against the car......before rag react to it......San sandwiched her between him and and car.....and kept his both the hands on either side of the car and locked rag in-between him...........

(This time rag hurted him.......his feelings hurted..... that's why he is furious.....now u will see another version of sanskar......angry San.....)

He hit the the car wall forcely........with his hands (fists)......and rag closed her eyes.....feared.... afraid.....

"What you said....I am STRANGER.....??? ......am I a stranger to you......??" Said furiously.....

Rag was really scared.......she never get scolding or beating from anyone....because she is everyone's favourite.....this is first time.....she is treated like this.....scolding......that with her mate...without her knowledge...........

"N.....nnn.....no....." said rag......said while stammering.......In fear.....

"Then....why u said that...(San again hit the car..... furiously......rag again afraid and closed her eyes......)....then why???"

"I....I was just kidding...." Said rag looking into his eyes which was furious......but to her she saw only hurt....hurt.....

San become normal but didn't change their position to normal....still in same place.....

"Tell me....why u don't believe in love"
San asked.....

Rag says looked into his eyes...."because....love is not a feeling......love....has a other word....it just....LUST....JUST LUST......just a desire.....that it....just a desire....to fulfill your needs...."

San.....lost his cool.....

He slapped her on her cheek..... which turned red by his hard slap......

He hold her chin tightly.....rag gasped in pain.........

And San said more furiously....."so....love is just lust for u....ok...so even if I propose u....it just because of lust on u....???" San asked in hurt with angry.....

Then after a few minutes of silence

"I LOVE YOU......" Said San looking into rag eyes........

"Yes ..." Shouts rag while smirking....

Yes....yes....u had only lust on me.....it just LUST....in the other name love.......so just want my body.....na....then all the people can say directly na... That I want your body.....then why these flimsy dialogues.....gifts.....likes and dislikes.......why these....."

Rag asked smirking at hurted San..
..

"So....how many days or how many how hours u want me......" Asked rag.....

Thud.....

Again a slap....but this time....it makes her swollen and at her corner of her blood is bleeding........her cheek turned to reddish brown......due to the hardest slap....tears started trimming from her eyes.......

San hold her shoulder furiously....said shouted....

"U.... insulted my love for u.....u know u are my mate.....u know what....I dreamed about my mate like she loves everyone....she is sweet...but u know what....but u doesn't know what is love....u doesn't the pain of love....the happiness of love.....u know u are heartless.....yes a heartless human....who doesn't know what love means.....u know....u never had feelings and will never have feelings.....just a heartless heartless....who don't have feelings.....u know in this world u just fit for nothing.....when a girl says a pure relation....just a lust....then she fit fit for nothing....even it just waste of time to talk to you....because u dont have feelings na....(smirk with hurt.... because he is hurt.....more...more than her...)"

Tears where flowing from her eyes without her knowledge.......over flowing......

"Just.....just mind your words Mr..."
Rag shouts not able to bear his talks which her so much ....

"Just... enough" rag shouts......

"Please...sanskar.....just stop it....." She shouts with tears..... which he already stopped....

"Why....?? It's hurt....OMG....Ms.heartless.....is hurt....with my talks...it's unbelievable.....yeah this is really unbelievable....." San says sarcastically....with a smirk....

"OMG....ms ragini is hurt by my world....I think it will surely come under world record....is it rag...." Again a sarcastic smirk...

"San....pls...it hurts..." Rag says as she cannot able to bear his talks.....

And rag ran away teary eyes....no actually tears were overflowing from her eyes......a girl who doesn't know to cry.....is sobbing heavily.....

(I said na.....she is everyone favourite....she doesn't know what is feeling...I mean. She does know what is happiness or what is sadness.or what is hurt..... because what she wishes it will just happen what exactly she want....so doesn't know about feelings....eventhough she has that.........)

(And San....he was hurted more than her.....to core....he never expected this.... He don't know what to do......he was hurt......more than her.....he was heartbroken.....cannot able to express his feelings......just broken into pieces which only rag can fix it again....with love not with lust.....)

Screens freezes

Heartbroken San.........

Heartless rag.....(is it??) According to our San.........



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