A way to write prologues

Commas

I found that making prologues with thousands of commas work, somehow. 

Look at trial of time, I've bolded every comma and period

 Time the trial, the trial to fail.The hardest to prove, the hardest to beat. Once you've trained, once you've fought, once they think that you're tough enough. Take the trial, the trial of time. Only time will tell, only time will tell who you'll become. You think, you concentrate, let them read your mind. See the demon, see it come, let it flow through your weakened mind. You will then have a power, a power to control but only time will tell who you'll become. Your village, your people, your family, you. Each village has their power, each person has their demon. Only time will tell who you'll become. There is a cat, a human, a dog. Only one will become real and the others will be gone. Sit in the cave, think of your past, think of the horrid times and your demon will laugh. Follow the laugh and the demon you'll find, where? In the trial of time. The trial of time, the time to fail. Your real self will surface, if time will tell. 

20 commas and 17 periods which means that there is at least one comma per sentence.

I am not a grammar expert but I don't think that you are supposed to have more commas that periods in one small paragraph. If I am breaking the rules of grammar I don't really care.