Lil Twist(ed) Love Story

Chapter 11

Ok so before I start, I really want some feed back on how my story is so far. I know its draggin, but I need some ideas.

Doctor:He is fine, the bullet missed his heart and lungs.

Lex:*Tears of joy*

Twist: When can we go see him?

Doctor: Anytime you want

Twist: Ok thanks

Doctor leaves

Prod: I am so glad he alright

Lex and Twist just look at him

Prod: What?

Twist: YOU almost killed Roc

Prod: Look I didnt almost kill him, it was Chuckie and his boys.  But he's alright now *smiles*

Lex: Pod, listen to me.  I dont think Roc should hang out with you for a while.

Twist: And why is that?

Lex: Look whats been happening.  He's been geeting smart with me, he took my brother to a gang oriented place, and *pauses*

Twist: And what?

Prod: *Knows what she's about to say*

Lex: *Looks at Prod* Nothing, nevermind.

Lex P.O.V.

I know Prod had got Regenae pregnant, and I was going to tell Twist, but its none of my business.  Besides if he wants to be a man, and act grown up, he's going to tell Twist.  But at the same time, I have a very strong feeling that its not his.  Dont ask why, but I do.

End of P.O.V.

They all went back to see Roc.  Now its just Roc and Prod.

Their both just sitting there looking at each other.

Prod: How you feeling?

Roc: I've been better

Prod: Aye man that was crazy right? *Laughs* I mean....*Gets cut off*

Roc: Prod, I could have died.

Prod: But you didnt!

Roc: Why you always have to say that!? What if I did? What would you have done then? You know what, forget you.  All I care about right now is my sister.

Prod: *Hurt* Come on Roc, you dont mean that.

Roc: Yes I do.

Prod: We promise to be brothers forever.

Roc: Looks like forever is never. Get out.

Prod; *Walks out crying*