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---hope this book is helping u people realize what most people well at least I, hate and makes me cringe. Enjoy!
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Nico is always super vampire-like, he can't live in the sunlight.
Will:*knocks on door* ITS MORNING WAKE UP!
Nico:*sunlight hits face* AHH IM MELTING! *melts into shadowy pool of shadow water.*

Out of ALL the things Octavian has done:
Blackmailing Hazel
Deceiving demigods
Trying to kill the Greeks
Killing Gwen
(Other stuff but I don't wanna say, so I avoid spoiling for those who haven't read BoO)
But NOOOO let's talk about the panda pillow pet.

Protagonist is this big powerful who is a ninja who has these unrelated powers.
Daughter of Poseidon can shoot fire somehow...
---for those who write mortal PJ AU's
If your gonna have the flirty girl or guy who is gonna try stealing (usually Percy or Annabeth) away from eachother. Then don't make them all ugh and ewww.

"Hi I'm STACY I have blonde dyed hair, but don't tell anyone #winkyface. I have dazzling blue eyes and a fake tan but like I said Shhh don't tell. Hehehehehhe. I just love Percy Jackson he's so tall and wonderful and so perfect for me I mean I am the most prettiest girl in school. He always says he has a girlfriend. He's so silly it's me, he's just a little shy obviously. So like yah. Oh ooh hotty 12 o'clock. Bye now."
OK so many things wrong with it can u name them?
1.cringey as fuck
2.that was painful to write
3.it is a big CHUNK WHICH I HATE WHEN PEOPLE DO THAT.
4.so stereotypical.
5.she always gotta be exposing herself. U people make it sound like she's wearing a thong and a see through crop top. Like stop
No.
If ur name is Stacy and u have blonde hair and blue eyes I did not mean to offend you this was just an example. SORRY. AND for any other blondes or people that dyed their hair and have blue eyes again SORRY JUST AN EXAMPLE!!!

Ok anyways adding on. My siblings go to high school and they say there is nothing like that at high school. Yah some girls wear crop tops and stuff but not that much exposure, they have a fucking dress code for gods sake.
    I could rant so much more but I think u get the point.

Rachel is MIA.

the only time she's In it is to give some dumb prophecy. Likes he is at camp she is there every day. Yah majority of us hate perachel but that doesn't mean we have to hate Rachel too.

Blackjack, tempest, Arion.
Where they at?

FRAZEL.
Seriously they are so cute together, why are they so underrated. And in the Fan fics they are like yah they are at camp Jupiter like DOESNT MEAN U CANT HAVE THEM VISIT OR IRIS MESSAGE FOR GODS SAKE.

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The end, hope u understand my cringe in all this.

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