Chapter Three

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Okay so I am going to be doing something similar to @imaginator1d (Author of the famous fan fiction After) She usually starts her chapters by letting her readers know what songs she listened to while typing/writing the chapter. So here goes!

Burn by Ellie Goulding

Gotta be you by One Direction (I know it has nothing to do with this chapter but my music was on shuffle okay... don't judge me.)

Ain't Nobody by Jasmine Thompson (Cover version)

Who am I by Casting Crowns

Thats it for now! Enjoy the read.... maybe if you read you will get to see if I added Niall already. *maybe*

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Commander Peterson's office is just around the corner. When I get there, the door is open so I just walk in. He looks up from what he was doing.

"Oh, Elouise, are you here for your Evaluation scores?" He asks. Well duh! I think to myself. I just nod.

"First of all, we usually give you the scores than you go on your journey and if you do well on it than you get to become a Unedo. Today there will be a change. Here," a piece of orange paper is handed to me. This might be my score."Look at it." he says.

I do as I am told. There is a chart and it is labeled "Points Through Semester." My head raises up for his approval to read. Commander Peterson nods. My eyes skim through the points. 20.20.20.20.20. Each row and column has the number of twenty points.

What?

I look up from the paper with a surprised look. Usually the highest you can get for points is a eleven, but what is this? 

"Twenty," I murmur to myself.

"You say something?" 

"I got a twenty on all the activities and training." now he seems to understand.

"You did, and that is good." he praises. Does this usually happen or something?

"But the highest you can get is eleven right?" I ask.

"Mhm, Elouise you are the first to ever score this high in decades."Commander Peterson explains. So this means good I'm guessing.

A black sofa is right behind me so I plot myself on it. Comfortable. Commander Peterson turns back to his desk and hikes himself up on the edge of it. His feet dangle in the air. Turns out he isn't that tall after all.

"Elouise, you know what this means? This means that you are a Unedo without even going on a quest." Holy crap! A Unedo without even doing what is required to be one. Awesome. I'm smiling to much but Commander Peterson doesn't seem to care. He joins in.

"This is ama-," the guy cuts me off. 

"Amazing? Yes I know." he finishes.

"Omigod, I'm a freaking Unedo!" my hands wave across the empty space in front of me. Elouise the greatest Unedo in the whole wide institute! Sounds really great. I still can't believe all of this. I can't wait to tell Mona Lisa and Bebis about this, my friends, they have always been there for me through the roughest times in life. Now i'm wondering if they made it also. Probably because they are really good and all they need is to go on the quest to earn the titles. Oh, almost forgot about the quest.

I open my mouth to speak, "What about the quest? Aren't we all supposed to go on it before we actually are told about us passing?"

We are silent for a moment, "Don't worry about it that much, you have worked hard. Now this doesn't mean you aren't going. You are still required to do so."

Ever since my parents died, I have wanted to impress them by working harder in passing title after title. This is huge. I can feel my Mother and Father looking down at me while holding a smile on their faces. I miss them... but I know they are in a better place now.

"And what is that quest?" Curiosity fills me up. Boy am I more than ready. 

"That I can not mention until tomorrow." 

A loud groan escapes from me, "Oh come on! Please oh please tell me! I will get on my knees if I have to."

He shuts his mouth in a playful way and pretends to zip it up and lock it. Ha ha very funny Commander Peterson.

"I won't say a word about it." he comments.

"Fine then! But can you at least give me a little clue?" I practically beg him. My behavior has never been this un-sophisticated around him since he is a commander. He gives me a wide glare.

"Alright, this quest is something that will just complete your life. There, I can not talk about it more or I will spoil everything." 

I am left standing in the office alone when he walks out. Could it really be that of a quest in order to complete my life? Hopefully time flies by really fast for it to be tomorrow already.

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*Jumps out of plane and lands on Doctor Who's front porch and bangs on door shouting for him to speed up time if he can*

You must be flipping out because I think I left you guys on a cliff hanger....AGAIN! 

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and yup thats all for today fellas!!! Love you all, keep it nice and crazy <4 (because ever since i read Divergent it it four not three!)

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