(Yeah I changed him to male. Sorry for all you who wanted a female oc! Also his new name is Jude)
Fire crackled around two blonde and others who stood in a plane of dark flames. The taller of the two, even though younger, cried out to his brother. Desperately trying to escape the binds of his other brothers holding him back. "Please!" He begged.
Meliodas looked away from the younger blonde. Turning his eyes downcast to the charred floor. He couldn't bare to see the pain in the familiar eyes.
"I'm sorry" Was the only words which escaped Meliodas' mouth as he stepped towards the swirling purple portal which held the key to travelling to the land of mortals.
"Don't go!" Jude pleaded. Tears built up in his jade eyes, yanking desperately at the hands.
Meliodas shook his head once more. "I'm sorry" He repeated. Stepping through the purple rip, making it close once he was through.
His binds left him. No longer supported, Jude fell to his knees. The salty liquid leaving his eyes rapidly as he stared - frozen - at the place his dearest brother once stood.
"Don't go" he whispered swaying. Lifting his hands, Jude urgently trying to grasp his brothers presence.
"No...." His voice faded, as did his vision. He slumped to the ground with a slump, eyes fluttering close into unconsciousness.
(And that's the first chapter if the rewrite! How is it? Better or worse?)
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One Of Many //Being Rewritten//
Fanfiction//THIS STORY IS BEING REWRITTEN!// Was previously known as: Meliodas' Sister - The Eighth Sin And The Demonic Sister Meliodas and Jude have always been close. Closer than the others. But when Meliodas' suddenly sets out for the Mortal realm his br...
