Two Souls One Heartbeat

A Serious Note: I'm lost and I'm going to hold a competition ;)

I don't think I can continue writing this.

I'm lost as hell in  what I should do next and I know all of you want more but the story just isn't clicking anymore. I'm in a major dilema that really sucks. I think I should change chapter 2 (3&4 also because they wouldn't make much sense after well for might because I could change the beginning paragraph and a few others and add and change things if I must) a bit because that 'prophecy' thing that I had written is just NOT something I should have written in a chapter. Because it litterally tells you what is and will go on. I also think that I should slow it down and make it have less of the fast emotion and scenes and put it in a more rational point. But I'm not sure it would help if I had your opinions. I have no idea how to change it because I can't. I honoestly can't. Many of you may think that I am just giving up but I sure as hell am not. I'm just lost in my way as a writer right now. I don't have much confidence in my work even though this story gets new reads, votes and comments most of the time. 

So in hopes that I can change chapter two, three and four and have total confidence in my writing again I want to hold a contest.

Things You Should Know:

I want a person that can change that bull shit of a prophecy into something that isn't complete and utter idoicy. It can't give away that there is a war but it should offer the thought in between the lines. It needs to go with the way you think the story should continue or the way that you hope it to. I also want it to be semi dramatic but only enough drama to be someone's second to last words (prophcey part). If you have the will power to re write chapter 2 to what you think fits to the story more do it. Once I choose which chapter 2 I would choose I will then take down chapter 3 and 4 and change them to how the second chapter goes. I also want you guys to answer a few questions but you don't have to if you don't want to.

Questions (Optional)

1). Should I slow chapter one down and cut it up and add more to the cut up peices and make them seperate chapters? 

2). What direction do you want the story to go into? 

3). Do you want Cain's mum to force them to get married? 

4). Do you think that I should make it so Ralissa and Cain are only friends until it starts to get further into the book and they start to touch longer, hug a lot more, whisper sweet nothings, go on dates, yada yada?

5). What should I change to make the story more enjoyable?

Prizes if your entry is chosen:

1). The dedication to that chapter and the next one.

2). You can have any character that you want to make up put into it. It will be a main character throughout the story.

3). The offer to work with me throughout the rest of the book and a sequel to it if it calls for one and we would put it on a joint count.

4). I will edit any work that you think really needs to be edited, that is one thing that I am still confident in doing.

5). Also I will give you the offer to work on a new work that you would like to do with me. It can be anything you would like as long as I agree which should be really easy because I'm really easy to please. As long as it is not and I repeat not a Harry Potter fan fic or a Justin Beiber fan fic. Although I will agree to make a One Direction fan fic. But thats only cause I think their hot and my sister is a total 1D nutt and she knows everything about them. Oh and if you don't want the book to be tied to just one of our accounts I will make a back up account because I think it might just be easier and we would both get even amounts of fans, votes, and comments. 

Side In Formation:

I really want to fix this up and make it more of a book rather than a short story because that's where its heading. I really don't want to dissapoint all my fans and knew readers. Email all entry's to the account allisterling@rocketmail.com its my personal acount and just to not confuse you all my name is actually Allissa Rose V. but I don't want to say my last name but at least I used most of my name for everything on here. 

. . . . . . huh . . . . . . I think lost just became to word of the day because I just got back to school after a week of medical leave and I was so utterly lost in my classes today! I was out due to having an emergency apendectomy.

Thanks again for those of you who do or do not choose to compete in this competition.

Love Ya'll Lots

Mumma Lissa <3