Complicated Love

This is my first book so leave comments to tell me what I'm doing wrong ?

Karma's P.O.V

*BEEP*BEEP*BEEP*

I roll over to turn the alarm off my phone , great another day of valley high (idk if it's real or nah) I went to take a shower and did my other hygiene shit . when I got out I lotioned up and went to pick out a outfit , I decided to wear light washed high waisted shorts with a black crop top and my gamma 11's and straitened my hair so it was just above my ass it's a nice chocolate brown with aquamarine underneath I'm about 5'2 but it's all good

I heard my phone go off signaling I have a text

Munch 💕💭👯 - you pick me up or I'm picking you up ??

Karma 👑- I'll pick you up , be there in 15

Munch💕💭👯- iight 😘

I went downstairs and seen my mom in the kitchen

Me- "hey momma"

Mama- "hey baby girl , your dad is coming this weekend to pick you up so you can hang with him and your brothers"

Me- "how long I'm staying there" I say while eating a granola

Mama-"a week maybe"

Me- " iight well I'm picking Munch up , love you "

Mama- "love you to"

After I heard that I left out the door and headed to my all black range rover I got when I turned 15 , my mom really didn't care and I'm turning 16 in a couple weeks 👏👏

I got to Munchs house and honked the horn , she came out in a skater dress with cutouts under the bust with her fire red 3's and I might say , my bitch was looking like a jawn !!!!

Me- "wassup my lovely lady"

Munch-"wadd it do boo"she said while putting on her seatbelt

I didn't answer her but put on the music and rode in silence

AT SCHOOL

me and munch walk in and go to our lockers , luckily their side by side

Munchs girlfriend Arielle came over

Arielle - "hey babe" and she kissed her

Munch- "hey hotstuff" I think there the cutest thing ever and there names match lol Munchs real name is Averi but I called her munch ever since we were 4 because she'd always munch no matter what so it kinda stuck till sophomore year and more to come

Arielle- " Yeo , Karma when you gunna let my bro Anthony talk to you ??"

Karma-"tell him stop selling drugs and maybe we could work something out"

Anthony-" that's how you feel " Anthony says coming from behind me , I turn around and come face-to-face with his chest , he's like 6 even he's turning 17 when I turn 16 , we have the same birthday 😒

Karma-"if you scare me like that one more time boy"

Anthony-"oh yea" he says while gently pushing me against the locker with his chest

Anthony -" what you gunna do" he whispers in my ear"

This boy knows how to drive me crazy and I hate it , me and him messed around one time last year , he was a sophomore and I was a freshman ,

Last Period

The bell rings in like 4 minutes and I'm just chilling playing flappy bird and I get a text from my dad

Big Baller 💸🏀- Ya brothers are having friends over , so you know the usual

Karma 👑- got it daddy

The bell rings

I walk out of class and to my locker and I see all these niggas chilling by my locker , it's Munch, Arielle , Anthony , my brother Louie , and his girl Christi

Me-"wassup homies"

Louie- "wassup lil sis , I heard you coming thru this weekend?"

Me-" yes and I hope the sis in law going to be there?"

Christi-"you already know boo" Christi and my brother been going out for a while , she's always been a sister to me other than Munch

Me-"it's litt for this weekend"

Anthony came over and out his arm around my shoulder and whispered in my ear "after school come over" after he said that I looked at him and gave him a questioning look he mouthed "trust me" and I said okay we spent like 10 minutes just sitting there and joking till everybody wanted to go home cause it was Friday "who's taking who home" I asked since only Me , Arielle And Christy . "I'll go with Arielle and Anthony " Munch said "Nah, imma go with Karma" Anthony said "don't try anything with my little sister" Louie said and I just laughed and started walking to my car , I got in and started it a minute later Anthony hoped in "so what's the plans" he said while smiling "I'm stoping by my moms to pick up some stuff for my dads , wanna come?" I said while pulling out of the parking lot "your house ? me and you ? why wouldn't I wanna come 😏" he said while turning on 97.1

We got to my house and and went inside I yelled for my mom but I guess she was at work by now so I went upstairs while Ant went in the kitchen for who knows what and I went to my duffle and threw in some sweats and shorts with some crop tops and my sneakers and then I went into my bathroom to grab my hair products and tooth brush and Anthony comes in with the fucking family sized chips with mad chips in his mouth "I'm sweffing ova tonife" I start laughing cause he sounded stupid "ok, let's go before it gets dark " we start heading out and I lock the door as we leave

My very first book so please let me know how it is