Part 1

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Hello everyone am here with the update .

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NOOR MANISON

Night -1:40 am

In a room we can see a guy sleeping , but there are soa mny frowns on his forehead , tears were flowing out from his eyes he was moving left and right in his sleep , he was murmuring – my noor please come back , please come back to your ali please come back

DREAM –

We can see a guy of 12 years running behind a small 6 years girl , she was running and was glancing at her back

Boy – noor please come back to me

Noor – no ali you have to catch me

Ali – noor please you know na you will fall ill f you run so much

Noor – no ali you are with me I can never fall you will catch me and then she falls down

Ali shouts – noor noor noor and cries

He runs everywhere but he cant see anything due to the fog , we can see he was now running with time he turns into a young man

Ali cryingly – noor please come back to me , I am dying without you

Then he hears a small sweet voice

Noor – then find me ali , pray to Allah he will only help you , never loose faith in allha he has written our destiny he can only help you , I will be waiting for you ali , your noor will be waiting for you , I will waiting for the day you will make me as your zawjah (wife)

And the fog disappears , the dream also break .

Ali cryingly – noor where shall I find you , your allha does not show mercy on me , from last 14 years every day I pray that he will give me some indication to find you , today I have everything for the world am ASAD ARHAAN SHEIKH but for you am your ali that storm separated us but I could not do anything ,please allah have mercy on us and unite me with my noor ,my bright light of my life my noor .

This luxurious life is for my noor , but if you are only absent then it means nothing to me , please come back to me I am dying here without you, I feel like am in jahannam (hell) and cries his heart out .

OTHER SIDE

Lady shouts – fathima where are you

We see a girl of age around 19-20 years coming out of kitchen wiping her hands with cloth , and she was wearing her hijab matching her light blue dress

Fathima – yes khala

Lady – don't butter me, I know the satan face which you are hiding with your beauty , the world may be blind , but am not my husband gave you shelter but you ate him , you killed him , now because of you today my daughter nikhath is fatherless , from tomorrow you wont go to collge , you will go and work as maid in noor mansion and you will stay there but remember you will send all the money to me and I will make sure that you don't do any shameful thing which would bring down my family's pride ,and fathima always remember what all sacrifices we did to raise you , you are debted to us when time will come I will snatch anything from you what I want and now just go and pack your bags . I think you are a bad luck that's why your parents threw you I guess .

Fathima cryingly – yes nagma khala

Nagma – now drink water and sleep , because after today's dinner nothing was left atht I could feed you ,and anyways you eat like cow , you need to reduce you fat.and one day if you wont eat you will not die .

By saying this nagma walks away , with her 22 years old daughter nikhath who was smirking at crying fatema

Nikhath- now fatema , work hard , you know if you wont work then how can I live a luxurious life and laughs .

Fatema pov – ali where are you ? please take me away , your noor is dying to be in your arms please Allah help me to find my ali and she takes the locket from her neck which was the last symol of ali's , it was a gold locket written ali and cries .

Fatema – if ali is in my fate then allha will definitely unite me with my ali, he can never do injustice to his children ,may be this is a sign of Allah or a way for me to find my ali ,all these 14 years I was crying for you , but never ever I gave hope ,Allah give me back my ali I want nothing in return .

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Promo-

Asad – are you the new maid

Fathima who was in her burkha (cloth which every muslim women wear )- yes sir

Asad sternly – I don't know what your name is but I don't want you to clean my room it's the only rule in noor mansion.

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