Justmainey (Team KyotiePatotie)
~Lintik na Pag-ibig
"i find it sweet, yung pag nagngingitian si grace at yhinn, nikikilig ako kahit medyo awkward kasi prehas silang babae. haha, nakyutan ako sa role ni ian, ang kulit e, pero totoo may mga ganung lalaki talag! swear! yung d naman gwapo pero kapal ng mukha para tuhugin ang magkaibigan.” -masterpogii
~ Minsan May Isang Rebecca
“Justmainey’s catchy phrase ‘Lahat pwede pero hindi lahat tama’ was something a reader can’t simply forget. I think that’s the vital fact when you’re writing a story. You just don’t write for an entertainment alone, you write so readers could somehow learn something out of it—you simply aspire to inspire others... Technically speaking, It somehow lack the part where you drive the readers to an emotional depth—it left me wondering what Ezekiel saw in Rebecca. The attraction should’ve been there pero you just end up describing him as a good-looking doctor out there to be Rebecca’s Knight and shining armor. Nakulangan ako sa part na dapat you make the readers realize gano ka-sayang yung love nila. It was also a bit redundant the story ended up with a wedding. It actually felt like rush siguro kasi may word limit ang contest so we always have to make it wise, precise and concise.” –Tonguetiedbabe & StridentEsquire
~ The Listener
“-I liked the ending. Again, eto yung parang imposibleng mangyari na magkakatuluyan sila at buti na lang na hinayaan silang hindi magkatulluyan.
-Yung backstory nung guy medyo hindi believable. Parang huh? Ganun sya kabata tapos ganun? Siguro dapat lang na-adjust yung time frame.” -JhingBautista
~ Kaya ‘Yan, Tiwala Lang
“Hindi ko napansin na mahaba pala ito kasi nagbasa lang ako pero hindi ako nabored. Para akong nagbasa ng isang diary. Maganda 'yung batuhan ng lines, saktong sakto siya. Lahat may laman. Lahat, nagmumove forward. Nakakagago langna matapos magsaya, biglang magkakaroon naman ng lungkot. Nakakaloko talaga.” -pilosopotasya
~ Tuwing Gabi Lang
“Cliché sabi nga ng mga nakabasa pero 'yung emosyon ramdam kahit pa pangkaraniwan na ang ganitong kwento. Masakit 'yung mga huling linya ng HIS. Saklap lang!
The story can’t stand alone without the support of another POV. 'Yun ang napansin ko agad after reading the girl’s POV. Napa-huh na lang ako sa ending ng POV niya. Medyo naguluhan ako or ako lang talaga? Kung hindi ko pa nabasa ang HIS, hindi pa magiging klaro sa’kin lahat. Na iyon pala ang ibig sabihin ng mga huling linyang binitiwan niya.
Technicalities. May maling paggamit ng Tagalog na salita. Nalimutan ang word spacing pero minimal lang. Bantas, may mali rin. 'Yun lang! God bless, my co-contender! ^_^” –louieadrielle
***** Justmainey is originally from tonguetiedbabe’s Team Awesome. She is the only contender among the Final Four that has survived in the game because of the “Steal Method”. This reminds us that there's still hope in second chances. *****
Misaholmes (Team KyotiePatotie)
~Change of Hearts
“Pero all in all, ang ganda. Ang flawless. Ang sarap basahin kasi nag light ng kwento, ng words. Lahat, ang ganda. Pakiramdam ko, nahiya ako nung nabasa ko ito kasi grabe ito, talento na. Wow.” –pilosopotasya
