I'm working on the second draft as of now, and well I'm considering posting a few chapters of the revised version up here.
However I do not know whether should it be in the same book or I should just use another. I do want to know what you think about this.
I have already finished editing the prologue and chapter one of the work. And I'm also debating the number of chapters I should be posting up here.
So, I'm leaving it open. Just tell me what you think of this, and what you think I should do for now. I'm open to it, since I just couldn't make up my mind.
One thing to note is that my second draft is a lot different than my first, in many ways as I am shuffling the characters role around, a slight tweaking to their characterization as well as small changes to their roles to the story. And that it is only a sample, I will not be posting the full work on here due to some concerns on plaragarism when it comes to here.
Neither will I be posting a sample, at the end of my final decision. If you really do want to know more, then message me personally. And at the end of the day, I decided to take down everything. Due to Wattpad and its ways are no longer tolerable and simply leaves a bad taste in my mouth.
The full edited version can be found on royalroad.com. I decided to post there after much thought and realising that they have a slightly better system.
The link is to the new story is: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/15236/within-a-grey-twilight
You can also find it on my blog, the link is on my profile.
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Fantasy"The wails of those who died wronged, have to be heard, as they will never rest in peace until it is done." Sorano Kazuho has a goal, to overturn a decision made almost a decade ago. Where three thousand lives had been lost because of it. But...
