A Redemption (Helsa, Elsa x Hans)

He's Changed Somehow Part 2

This is part 2 of he's changed somehow. Hope you enjoy. Constructive criticism please. Thank you for reading.

-Secret Fan Fiction Writer

After breakfast me and Hans walk threw the garden, he picks me flowers creating a bouquet.

Once we have walked the whole garden he asks me

"Do you want to go into town?"

"Why" I ask "Where would we go?"

"Well" he says "I have a surprise."

"If that's the case, I guess we should go into town" I say.

We both walk with are intertwined together. We walk all the way threw town, passing the diners, stores and churches, but don't stop at any.

"Where are we going?"  I finally ask.

"Close your eyes" He whispers "We are almost there."

"Ok." I mumble closing my eyes, letting his hands guide me.

We walk for about a minute until he finally says

"Open your eyes now"  he tells me.

I open my eyes slowly, to see a beautiful picnic by the lake a. It's beautiful and huge, there are at least three picnic boxes, and like most picnics a red and white plad blanket.

"Oh Hans" I say

"Come on" He tells me "Sit"

"Okay" I answer with a smile.

I walk over to the blanket sitting down, Hans follows.

"Hans, why did you do this?" I ask.

"For you" he tells me.

A surge runs threw me, giving me my a urge to kiss him.  Should I just give into my urge?

------------------------------------------------After 3 Hours of eating, talking and laughing, at the lake.

"Hans, Can I ask you something?"

"Yes, of course" He answers.

"Well," I start "Why do you... Why do you care about me?" I ask.

"What do you mean?" He says "Is it a bad thing?"

"No, I just I thought you didn't care..." I whimper out.

"I've always cared..." he says. "I just made a mistake before."

"Really?" I ask.

"Yes, and I'll never make thoose mistakes again." He answers.

It's about 5:30 and the stars are starting to come out, they are more beautiful than ever.

We sit staring at the stars not speaking, it's beautiful to be able to relax like this.  I don't have to worry when I'm with Hans.

"Hans" I say after about 20 minutes of sitting in silence.

"Yes, Elsa?" he asks.

"I love you" I whisper.

"I love you too." He whispers back.

We lay together our arms intertwined, I have my free arm laying across his chest, so I can feel his heart beating. It's the best moment in my life, knowing that someone loves me just makes my heart want to jump out if my chest. He leans down kissing me slowly and softly.  It's my first actual kiss... well mutual kiss anyway. He doesn't put any pressure on his lips he just slowly kisses me.  I love it... I love him.

"Can we just stay like this forever?" I whisper once his lips leave mine, I still keep my lips inches from his.

"Always." he says "Because I love you."

"I love you too." I say snuggling closer to him.

We stay there until about 10:00 at night and then I fall asleep.

In the morning

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I wake up in my bed with Hans next to me.  Did he carry me all the way back? That's so sweet.

Thank you for reading and I hope you enjoyed.  Next chapter will come soon. Constructive criticism please. Next chapter has a big surprise in it......

-Secret Fan Fiction Writer