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I was at Wal-Mart just walking through the store. Then I heard something, loud screams. But, these were of happiness and laughs followed. Then two shopping carts and four giggling boys were in front of me. They ran past going to the electronics section. Okay, well thats odd I never see that happen. I walked to look at some skateboards because I might start riding for once. While I was looking I bumped into someone. "Sorry," I said quickly planning to now avoid this person but when I got up I saw a cute boy. "It's alright I love it when cute girls bump into me," he said smiling and helping me up. Gosh his smile is so cute and his touch soft . Then the four guys from earlier came to the aisle. "Oh hey guys," he said looking at them. "This is.. um whats your name?" he asked looking over to me. The blond one laughed," You got a date and dont even know her name,nice one Jack." I started blushing. Jack, thats a cute name, matches his smile. "Oh, um I'm Madlyn." "Thats a nice name," the one in the front said. (Daniel)
"Thanks i guess," ugh why did i say i guess it was obviously a compliment. "Well I'm Jack,"the skater boi said. "I'm Corbyn," said the blonde one. "I'm Zach," said the youngest looking one. "I'm Jonah," said the the one holding coffee. ( typical Jonah lol)"And last but of course not least I'm Daniel," the one that complimented my name said. They all looked at each other and nodded no. What was that about? "So um do you wanna go hangout?" Jack said. "Yea sure," I agreed grabbing a skateboard . We checked out and walked outside. "We'll be right back," Corbyn yelled leaving me alone with Jack. "So Madlyn," Jack said trailing off. "You wanna teach me to skateboard?" I asked joking. "You know me already," Jack said smiling.
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Skater Boi (Jack Avery Fan Fiction)
Teen FictionI was in the skate board aisle until I ran into the boy of my dreams. Only problem is he's always on the move.
