Hey guys...firstly thankyou sop much for taking time out to read this, i really appreciate it.Secondly i would love to hear comments so please leave behind your views. And lastly this is the first time i am uploading anything so... and also please be lenient when it comes to my spellings as i really suck at them so
I hope you guys like it....
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She held it closer, the last of their pictures she had left
She saw his face close to her's as she wept
Tears streamed down her face as she remembered the last conversation they had
Thought of all the sweet things he had said,it drove her mad
She screamed a curse to the sky as she fell
Chocked by loss and overwhelmed
She asked why him,why was he the one to suffer
After all he had seen he surly deserved better
She cried and cried till tears came no more
She screamed and screamed till her throat was sore
Wishing things could go back to the way they were
She tried to grab on to anything that would hold her
All she wanted was his happiness
All she needed was to see him smile
All she got was his sorrow
All she got was goodbye
Tired and broken she did'nt want to do it anymore
She lost all control and let it go
Sinking deep into her emotion
Losing all reason it was like drowning in an ocean
Down and down she fell
Trapped in darkness she was stuck in a well
All she saw around her was his pretty face
She felt helpless as if trpped in
a never ending maze
All she could hear were his mortifing screams
She begged for forgiveness but knew she wouldn't be redeemed
The world around her mattered no more
Her heart, mind and soul completely torn
As she lay there staring at the sky
She knew the gun in her hand would make it all right
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Okay people so thats it. please tell me how you liked it and well it was the first poem i wrote so i hope you liked it. :D:D
