Meet the turtles

Trouble

I was walking home from school and i were in year 8 . my house was not far but sometimes it take 5 - 10 min to get there depends how fast i walk . As i was walking home i felt like i was being followed . And i was running as fast as i can then i found out that i was in a dead end .

I heard something and turn around to find out that it was a cat . Oh my gosh it is so cute so i pick it up and give it a little stroke . Then the cat just got angry and run away well that was wierd i thought .

I then start walking not looking where i was going . Then out of no where i bumb into someone and as i did i felt something hard and boney . And i look up and saw a mutant dog that showing bones . 

I was shocked and starting to back away as i did the dog was smiling . When i was still walking backwards something got in the way . And i felt something slimy . Before i could turn around i felt a cloth over my mouth and nose . As i was smelling it i was starting feeling sleepy . So i was trying to get it off . But whoever was behind me was grabing my waist so i could not get out .

Finally i let my self sleep into darkess . When i woke up i found out that i was tied up on a roof top . Then that dog what i saw before i went into darkess . And a slimy fish . I finally got confidence to say something and said who are you and what do you want from me . Then the dog said you will find out soon .

Then i said you will never get away with this . Then the fish came and blindfold me . Then i heard fighting and someone came near me so i back away . Calm down i just going to help you i heard . So what is your name he said . Melissa what is yours . Leo he said well okay then . Then someone came and pick me up then said put your weapons down or she falls . Now let her go someone said .

Okay then someone said then i fell down . I then landed in something and i took the blindfond off . To find out that i was in a big bin . Well that was luckly . You won't get away with this i heard . And i turn around to see four giant turtles . I know that voice they the one that try to rescue me . I then got anrgy and said hey back off . Then they all look at me and that dog come up to me and knock me over . Then i saw his big hand and that was the last thing i saw before i was knock out .

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