Melrose High

HI hi everybody! Anybody? Somebody!! lol. This is my first published book so I would love LOTS of feedback! I know this is short but the other chapters will be longer, I pinky swear!

  Timothy it’s your turn to greet and guide the new kid. …No, I’ve filled in for you three times! Plus I have someone anyways. Ok look meet us at the valley. …Yes the court yard, and no I’m not worried about the girl you’ll have cause ill kick your ass if you do. I gatta go. Love you bye. As I hung up the phone I looked over the Greet and Guide sheet. Aiden Englesia’s sheet I got a text message from my best friend Makinsi.

M: Hey Lena you tell Timothy it’s a guy yet?

L: No, you know he’ll freak out if I do.

M: Sneaky sneaky.  No stepping out!

L: I gatta go, I’m not sneaking, you’re crazy, and Goodbye J

M: Bye Love.

   Hi! I said to the first stranger I saw, you must be Aiden. No the boy said highly agitated. I’m Mark; I’m in your Environmental Science class. With that mark stalked off. Hi a sultry voice said from behind me. I’m Aiden are you my Greet and Guide? I froze in place. Six feet of tan green eyes and perfect teeth and lip’s stood before me.

    His lips started moving but I wasn’t all the way there yet. What? I said when most of the fog cleared from my mind. He chuckled under his breath sending shivers up my spine. I said please be my guide because you’re too beautiful not to be. I’d been called beautiful before but, hearing him say it made my flesh tingle with want. Well it’s your lucky day!

   I said in my most easy going voice. Can I see your schedule? Well it looks like you have Art3 with me English 12 with me, World History with me, Environmental Science with me, Choir with me, and finally study hall with me. When I looked back to his face I almost fainted from the beautiful smile I saw. He was talking again but I missed it. What? I nearly shouted. This time he laughed loudly at my M.I.A moment.

    The sound of his deep throaty laugh had the same effect as his smile. I said I’m the luckiest guy in the world. I could feel my skin burning up again. Thanks I said trying hard not to blush. Realizing I was fawning over him I quickly asked if he needed a sketch book for class so I had a reason to turn away. Sure do you have one? Yeah it should be in my locker but if not we can go to the school store.

   So, do you have a boyfriend? Aiden asked as if it was nothing. Yes his name is Aiden, I swooned. I mean its Timothy! My boyfriend’s name is Timothy. Well that can change he joked. I shockingly caught myself hoping. As we rounded the corner my blood went cold and my heart nearly stopped. I saw Timothy lean in to a pretty Red Headed girl and kiss her on the lips, in front of his locker across the hall from mine.

    Without thinking I ran for him. Sweeping him down by his waist, I knocked him down sliding with him an inch down the hall leaving the girl to fall down onto the wall. I started Grabbing and punching whatever part of him I could reach. After about two minutes I felt a pair of ultra-warm hands grab me.

   Once we were back at the corner Aiden’s warm hands enveloped me into his warm embrace. Finally I started crying. A sudden Aiden began to shake. Aiden I whispered slightly alarmed. ¡Voy a matar a ese hijo de puta! What I said growing worried. I said I’m going to kill that son of a bitch! Well I think I handled that already so there’s no need. I slightly chuckled. I found his anger enticingly sexy.

   When he calmed down I walked him to my locker to get the sketch book. Once I handed him the book I looked myself over in the mirror. Stifling a scream I ran for the bathroom to fix myself up. Once I was ready I walked out of the door with confidence I didn’t really have. I found Aiden still by my locker looking perfect. More perfect than before. It seems like every time I look at him a fog comes over me.

    I can’t see or think of anything that doesn’t involve his eyes, his smile, his lips, and his laugh. Once again he caught me staring, which only caused him to smile making it worse. When I finally focused my sadness hit me like a ton of bricks. Seeing my face fall caused a flash of anger to cross Aiden’s face. So he said, smiling again; I never got this guide and great welcome I’ve heard so much about. What I said slightly unfocused for other reasons this time. Oh the guide and great welcome! I said slightly happier. The guide and great is this dorky chant me and Mikinsi came up with our fresman year. I can't wait to here this, he said slightly sarcastic. 

Your old school you will surley miss

but welcome to this one

 would you like a kiss?

He looked slightly surprised. Crap! I'm sorry I left the candy in my locker. I'm really sorry, its just it was so crazy this morni - Aiden suddenly leaned in and kissed me. A pair of firm strong arms wrapped around me as my hands slowley circled around his neck. Realizing we were in the hallway  I started to pull away. WHAT THE FUCK LEENA!! Makinsi screached.