So I finally decided to come back to this because well I got nothing better to do.
Note this contains spoilers for Warriors: Fire and Ice by Erin Hunter so if you plan on reading the series or you're not on fire and ice yet, please skip this.
So I made this drawing back in October and I used to be super proud of it but now I can see that it could've been better but hey, I still like it.
Some places I did pretty good with:
The colors
Some places I could've improved:
The coloring of the whites of the eyes
Cinderpaw's expression
Cinderpaw's head
So if you haven't read Fire and Ice, let me explain the scene for you real quick: basically Cinderpaw was crossing the thunder path (road) to get Tigerclaw (I think??? It's been awhile since I've read the book) when she gets hit by a car. She lives, thank starclan, since she's one of my favorite characters. I decided to draw Cinderpaw right before she got hit.
Well um that's about all I have to say about this drawing
