Nalu the badgirl and the badboy

At the beach (part 2)

Hey guys! Please comment what I can do better cause this is my first story and I've got no idea what i could do to improve it. Well thanks to the people who read this book, I appreciate it! bye!!

(Last time lucy and Natsu were about to kiss, but someone yelled lucy's name)

Now:

*lucy and Natsu look to the side, where a handsome, blonde and well-built guy is standing*
Lucy: oh hey... long time no see, sting.
Natsu: wait. This is sting?!
Sting: yeah, that's me. and who are you??😒
Lucy: umm...natsu? can I borrow you for a second?
Natsu: sure.

(They go about 10 meters away)

Natsu: so? What's up?
Lucy: ok so I could do the whole "badgirl thing" on him, but I already tried it once or twice, and it didn't have an affect on him!
Natsu: and how can I help?
(Lucy whispers the plan into natsu's ear)

(They walk over to where sting is standing)

Natsu: sooo sting, I've heard about you.
Sting: I hope my princess was friendly!
Lucy & Natsu: princess?!!
Sting: yeah that's what I call my  lucy!
Natsu: I think you haven't heard, then?
Sting: what?

*french kiss*
Natsu: Luce is mine, and only mine! Got it?
Sting: lucy is this true?
Lucy: does it look like Natsu is kidding?
Natsu:

Natsu: I swear if you lay one finger on her, you're as good as dead!
Sting: o-okay!
Natsu: good.
Lucy: *smirking*
Sting: well it was nice seeing you anyway, Lucy!
Lucy: *rolls her eyes* yeah I know. now bye have a great life!
Sting: thanks lucy😊 I will!
*sting leaves*

Natsu: wow I'm glad that's over!
Lucy: he can be a so annoying!
Natsu: now. Where were we😏?
Lucy: hmm I think we were here...

*lucy kisses Natsu's scarf, making him think they were about to kiss, only to irritating and tease him further*

Lucy's POV:
As I pull away from the kiss (onto his scarf), he blushes wildly and rasps into my ear with his deep, sexy voice :

"You're playing a very dangerous game here, tiger! Stop playing with fire or you'll get burnt!"

Don't I know it. Instead, I say :

"Come at me badboy! I can handle you!"

Natsu's POV:
"Come at me badboy! I can handle you!"

Then she walks away like the model that she is, her cute ass swinging at me.
Dammit! I hate it when she does that! No one ever had that kind of control over me! Except her.

"Hey flamebrain!"
"What up, ice princess?

No ones POV:
Gray: what'd you call me?
Natsu: ice princess!
Gray: why you little piece is shi-
Lucy: guys, guys, i think we can all calm down, right? We're at the beach, trying to have fun!
Gray & Natsu: NO!!
Lucy: fine then. I'm sorry I have to do this!

Lucy: *mumbling*

Survey the heart,
open the seas...
All the lands, far and wide...
Show me the appearance...
With such grace.

I am the ruler of the winds...
Aspect become complete
Open the malevolent gate.

Oh 88 stars of the elements

Rain down!
(Author: that isn't a real spell I just made it up well I kinda took the words Lucy said in urano metria and changed them a little bit! Gomen!)
Natsu & Gray: *on the ground, shaking*
Erza: nice one, lucy! But what did you do to them?
Lucy: oh it's a simple spell i "made" myself to distract someone! It doesn't do any damage, but the original version (Urano metria) is deadly when spelled correctly!
Erza: *thinking: what?! She just „made" her own spell? Just who is this girl?! I have to tell makarov!*

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Ok I know this chapter was a bit short but could you tell me what I should change? Should I put in more pictures or more text about different ships other than Nalu like Gale or Gruvia? Could you please write "ships" or "pics" in the comments? Thanks!
~Mia