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hey guys this is my first story! tell me if its good or not, and give me some suggestions!

lola's POV

You were just passing your towns local boutiques with daddy's credit card. You say 5 loud, good-looking, well-dressed, obnoxious boys. They sort of look like- OH MY GOD ITS ONE DIRECTION. And you KNOW they have some MAJOR cash. Let the planning begin.

You slyly bump into the curly haired chap, he was the hottest and as well as the cheekist. easiest target.

'OOPS, i am so sorry! are you okay!?' you say.

'No, no its my fault!' he started, 'I'm Harry by the way.' he winked. good, he's already falling into your trap.

'Lola, nice to meet you.. and you guys are?' you put your hand out to shake their hands, and have a huge fake smile on. They looked shocked, of course you knew who the were! But they didn't need to know that if you were gunna get money from any of them.

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abigail's POV

It was just a normal day at work, long and boring. This small town shake shack didn't get much business. The ice cream, and the shakes were- Wait a minute, is that- thats- thats LIAM PAYNE. did ONE DIRECTION just walk into my work? okay abby, contain yourself, one direction is here. There going to order ice cream. And then you can get a picture. i know what your thinking, why aren't there hundreds and thousands of girls here screaming, because this is a SMALL town and the concert isn't even here.

'excuuuuusssee mee, miss?' that doncaster accent was getting my attention for the past 10 minutes.

'oh, yes, hi. how can i help you?' you snapped out quickly of your trance, even quicker when you say the bitch lola. what was she doing here? god. wait was she WITH them was she- IS SHE DATING ONE OF THEM? of course only harry and niall are- NO NO NONONONO>

' can we get 6 choc-' louis started but was quickly interrupted by niall.

'actually make that 7, 7 chocolate milkshakes. please.' he stated with his irish accent, being oh so distinct. ' and please keep that seventh shake for yourself.' he finished with a smile and his face becoming flushed.

'sure, and thank you. Niall, right?' play it cool abs. play it co- who were kidding you were so fangirling on the inside. You saw everyone heading to a table except for Niall.

'uhm, abigail? could we maybe sit and chat sometime?' he started, his face completely flushed. how could you say NO?

'i would love that. here just add your number in my phone, i'll text you after work.' you finished, biting your lip nervously. He took your phone added it and went to sit down. Lola was glaring at you. Why? bitch.

*bzzzzbzzz*

new message; lil' leprechaun :)

you clicked -read- and the message said;

~your really cute when your thinking/ working. x ;)~