Desire & Blood - The Thorne Siblings

Notes

So, this was the story of the Thorne Siblings.

I hope you had a good time reading it.

The cliché of the clerk-meeting-her-bad-boy-billionaire-uberboss is one of the more common ones you find here on Wattpad. And the world wasn't waiting for yet another book telling it.

But I wondered what would happen if I wrote it, how it would feel, and how it, and some other common tropes, would blend with my personal style of writing.

And I definitely had fun doing this.

In a next step, I want to edit the book. There are some issues that I am aware of, but I'm sure I don't see them all. So now is the right time for you to come up with that feedback of yours. Rant at me! What didn't work for you, where should I change this?

Please leave your comments below or send them to me via PM/DM.

I've also added an extra chapter, and there may be more to come. The one I've already written an alternative version of chapter 42, where we see Thierry for the last time, where he jumps into the sea. In the following chapter, E1, there's the same sequence of events, but it's told from Thierry's point of view. 

Thanks for bearing with me all the way to here.

And, by the way, if you haven't had enough of my stupid writing at this point, you might want to check out my other Mystery/Thriller book, The Egg at Dumstreet. It's more on the side of Mystery, much less cliché, and from a very different character's perspective.

RS