just a quick question about my main story

Then And Now

The first two chapters of my story "my dealings With Devils Spirits and Gods" were written while I was still a highschool student. Those who wondering why chapter 2 took so long? I just did some final revisions on the second chapter before releasing it not too long ago as well as I did not have this app for some time. I have plans for some conflicts and you'll see more of Demetri's( or Demetrius's) oldest friends and yes Lucy's gonna be shooting things. Just look forward to what I have planned and feel free to give your input.