Who Killed Richelle? ✓ [UNEDITED]

Hello

"Hello, is it me you're looking for?"
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Chloe POV

This is crazy. Somehow Thalia managed to survive what someone had the guts to do to try and maybe even kill her? It's terrible.

She's out of hospital now but fears the murderer. I haven't spoken to West or James in ages since me and west had a fight over West's new girlfriend. The truth is.. I want to be West's girlfriend.. I can't bare to see him with another girl.

"Hello, is it me you're looking for? I can see it in you're eyes-" the lyrics from Lionel Richie's song 'Hello' really makes me think. His girlfriend, Jessica, really needs to know I like west without her knowing I like west.

But back to Richelle's murder. I walk into the Studio 1 and see Piper sitting down, heavily breathing. I call Riley and she comes as quick as possible.

We sit next to Piper and ask what's wrong "ah it's nothing, I'll save it for another time. Right now we need to find out who Killed Richelle?" Well she's not wrong. I swear if it's Noah our mom will literally flip! Our dad, well I don't know what he will do.

Although it could be one of the others. I know it's not Elliot or Thalia because they witnessed the murder with their own eyes.

Thalia hasn't spoken since the shock she got from her life support machine when the murderer cut the cable connecting her to the damn thing.

Me, Riley, Davis (what I'm calling Berkeley's character for now based on rumours I've heard from Instagram) and Piper go check up on her at her house.

Her mom is there because she knows she can't leave Thalia like this. She hasn't eaten, drank or slept for days.

We can't leave this case until it's solved. Richelle was like my little sister, Elliot is still upset over her too. He may be like an ex-broadway dancer but he made Richelle happy. He sent her flowers even though he wasn't allowed at the studio. He made her smile when nobody else could.. he made her the happiest.

Lola left.. Josh left.. Heather left.. it's all falling to pieces. Not to mention there's this new girl, Lilly, on the block here to steal the spotlight of this dance studio.

I'd rather one of the OG dancers from last year did than her. I've heard alot about Lilly and I'm not sure about her at all.

(493 words. Sorry it's so short. I have ideas but i want to not make this such a short story so I'm leaving so much suspense. I think I'll save Piper being sexually abused by Noah for another story because this story is to focus on Richelle and how she was murdered. I included some storylines that already were in place so yeah.

I changed some of the personalities up a bit and yes in this story chloe and Noah are siblings. Let me know who you think is the murder because there's basically no clues in this? [i don't think?] I could be wrong but meh. Hope you are enjoying this! I haven't seen any 'who killed *enter name*' stories before so this has been a big step for me! Hope you like it!
~em 🙋🏽💓 )