Niam Horayne - Love in a Boy Band

Hi everyone, this is my first published story. So I mainly want feedback. I want the feedback to be constructive. It's fine if you say that it's bad, but please tell me why it's bad so that I can make it better. I think I'm going to do this mainly in Liam's pov, but I will definitely put some of Niall's pov in. I can also write in the pov of Louis, Zayn or Harry if I get requests. An editor would be greatly appreciated. Sooooooooooooooo.....without further ado:

Niam Horayne - Love in a Boy Band

Chapter One

Liam's POV:

I looked around at the boys. The lot of them were laughing at Louis while he fake cried on the couch because of we had recently run out of carrots.

         My eyes landed on Niall who was giggling uncontrollably. His gorgeous electric blue eyes caught mine, his braces showing as he grinned widely.

.…Whoa there, Liam. You're just his friend. Friends dont think their best friends eyes are gorgeous.

Crap, I thought I had those feelings out of the way.I had a crush on Niall while we were on the X-factor but with him not showing any interest I buried my feelings with "Daddy Direction-ness" and a girlfriend. If the feelings came back now that would just be bad timing. We were about to go to the U.S. to do interviews and publicity stuff for our new album, and I had agreed to room with Niall. If the pesky feelings for Niall came back, time in our hotel room would definitely be awkward.

"Li?" Niall's Irish accent pierced my thoughts.

"Sorry. What were you saying?" I mumbled. 

"Will you take me to Nando's, Li? I'm hungry. And they wont have Nando's in the U.S. when we visit. Please?"

How could I refuse? "Come on, Nialler. I'm taking you to dinner."

I told the rest of the boys that we were going to dinner. As I handed Niall his coat and stepped outside I was left to wonder if the feelings I had for this boy were real, and if he would ever feel the same way.

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At Nando's, a pretty brunette led us to our table. At first, I could tell she thought we were a couple, and I smiled inwardly at the thought. My happy fantasy was broken almost when I saw that Niall was heavily flirting with her. My chest clenched when he turned his dazzling eyes up to her and gave her his signature smile. That was the smile that had all the fans falling at his feet, and it was that same smile that had me, his best friend in the world, falling for him to.

Niall's POV:

I turned and smiled at the waitress, but all I really wanted to do was talk to Liam. He obviously wanted me to meet girls so I decided to flirt a bit, maybe then he wouldn't bug me about it so much. I wasn't in love with him like the fans thought, but I liked to think that we had some type of bromance.