With me with you

My willowing ball

       After about three months the ball was today. My hair was curly my dress was on I chosse the one with a red bow in the frent. All the guys here I had no idea who they were but Gradly and Edline told me that this was only the last half of the list was here and that the frond half will be here in the introduction. 

     When it was finally the introduction came it stared from the last person to the first I sat in a throne in the frent of the ball room. The last person on my list was some guy named Herry. Keef was my number five. Tam was my number ten and I practically jumped for joy when they a said that Fitz was my number one . 

'Hi so I guess I'm you number one. And by the way your my number on to' he said and at that moment my favorite song came on. 'Do you want to dance I know you like this song'

'Sure that would be nice' I said with a little to much excitement in my voice. We got up and started slow dancing he was a great dancer. We probably danced for a hour and a half. Just looking in to each other's eyes. 'This was fun but I'm going to go eat ' I said ' me to I'm Hungary ' he said 

'Every one every one yes I know it's time for Sophie to choose the one she would like to marry and see if you will prepose!'Edline and Gradly said

 I want up and looked around and there he was Fitz his teal eyes and there I knew I was going to Choose him ' I choose Fitzory vanker ' I said with a proud voice  he came up neled down 'Sophie foster will you marry me' he said ,almost in trears I said 'YES'

   Then I jumped in to his arms. We both started to cry. ' Love you' I said '  Love you to' he said.

        That next week Fitz moved in to my house because I had a bigger room. It was only until we got are own house but it was nice. ' Hey ' said as he put his arms around my wast I layed angst him.'hey I said how was work application.' I said 'pretty good hey can we talk' he said 'About what???' I asked 'About are life when we get married like kids or what are you going to do where we are going to live.'he said with a soft voice.

        'Well I kind of want four kids or five at most and two at least and I want to live close to here and I want to be a keeper.' I said with a strong voice. ' ok but I want only four kids and I agree with the rest ok'He said 

 All of the next month was full of Partty planning Bianca cam over manny time because her and Keef were getting married about three months after me and Fitz. 

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