I really need some constructive comments whether its ideas for plot or grammar or just how you think the chapter went
but yeah I really need some ideas for some of the plots
+ Qadira is NOT based on qadir from ATOLAH I came up with the name before I read ATOLAH
++ I don't own the pictures
YOU ARE READING
blood of the mind
Fantasya medievally set fantasy I've tried to no include any thing I don't own the Sarthen emperor has left to conquer the eastern land of west and the Narth shall leave to conquer it to without the emperor the Sarthen baron fight for supremacy the reachi...
