BROKEN SOULS (Rewriting)

FIGHTING

Abhay rushed in the hospital, he was like a mad man. All he wanted was seeing that innocent smile of his Angel to calm him.

He saw a nurse and ignoring everyone looking at him asked the nurse

"Aliya!! Where is A-Aliya Raichand?" He was panting, the nurse look at him worried. Abhay was lucky cause the nurse was one of the nurse who was with Aliya a few minutes ago.

"Sir calm down miss Raichand is getting operated." Abhay couldn't tell what was the pain he was feeling just hearing the word operated. Is he going to lose his angel?

"Take me to her!! Please!!" the nurse nodded and lead the way. She could have just told him the way but Abhay seems so affected and devastated, she thought she better help him.

They get in the elevator while Abhay was impatient finally the door open and he run out.

"Go straight" she smiled

"T-thank you" he said and run until he saw everyone there.

Alina crying while Misha trying to comfort her.

Kabir was standing there worried.

"Kabir!! How is she?"Kabir looked at him and walked towards him.

"It's been one hour she's inside,we still don't know how she is doing" Kabir said with teary eyes.  

"I-its  my fault I should have been there.... I-its my fault.....n-now  she w-will leave me" Abhay mumbled, Kabir look at him

"she will be fine Abhay, please don't worry" but Abhay didn't listen and fall on his knees

"No! it's my fault she was my responsibility...n- now I'll lose her.....I couldn't keep my promise my Angel will hate me.... I'm useless P-Piya will hate me too..... Piya will leave me too.... I'm a bad person everyone will leave me.... Everybody will hate me, they will leave me A-Alone......I failed K-Kabir I fai......" Abhay started hyperventilating, he was getting panick attack and Kabir freak out he quickly crouched down infront Abhay, forced him  look at his eyes by holding Abhay's face.

"Abhay look at me!! No one will leave you!! Aliyah will be fine!! You need to calm down!! You need to breathe!! C'mon man!! Breathe with me!!"

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After few tries Kabir finally succeed in gaining Abhay's attention and he calm down a bit.

Before Kabir could calm down too he noticed the panick from earlier in Abhay's eyes got replaced by anger  and the next moment he was harshly pushed away.

"No Kabir it's all my fault and I should be punished." He started banging his hands on the wall.

"Yes I should be punished!!" Abhay was losing it, he had no control on his emotions... nothing.

If that didn't made other cry, then they will be lying.

"ABHAY!! STOP!!" Kabir turned him  by his shoulder giving him a hard slap.

Everyone's eyes widen, Kabir glared at Abhay with tear filled eyes.
Abhay hung his head low, blood dripping down his knuckles.

"She is getting operate for god sake! You are not alone in a fault at this"

Kabir voice soften as tears started filling in Abhay's eyes.

"Listen Abhay, try to calm down doing all this is only making the matter worst, let's just pray that our angel is fine"Kabir rubbed his arms.

"K-Kabir I love my Angel so much , she will be fighting right?" Abhay had his eyes filled with tears looking at Kabir to reassure him.

"Everything will be fine Abhay." Kabir pulled him in a hug.

One hour pass and Alina stopped crying, her eyes were only on Abhay  who was like a lifeless body and expression was like everything important in his life was taken away from him, it's not false though his  angel was struggling between life and death.

Soon they saw the door opened and the doctor came out with serious expression.... 

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