Dawn Continues. (Not Going To Be Continued)

Dawn continues.Chapter 1.

hey guys so i am almost 12 and this is my first book i have ever written so don't criticise it please and i hope you all like it. by the way it is going to be mostly Renesmee's POV.

Chapter 1: Me

Renesmee's POV

Its my birthday tomorrow and I'm really excited for two reasons one because Alice is going all out and two because were going to see grandpa Charlie and we will be bringing Jacob back with us.

''hey sweetheart''i heard my mum say.''hi''i said back to her. I love my mum and dad so much but sometimes it gets on my nerves that my dad can read my mind.''Are you OK baby?''she asked me.''yes mum i'm fine.'' I said back to her in response .''OK Alice wants you upstairs in her room'' I wondered why Alice wanted me but i went upstairs anyway.

''Alice'' I said knowing she would hear me.''In here'' she called.''hi'' I said as I walked into her room.''hello'' she said as i walked in '' I've got something for you'' as she said it she smiled.''what is it'' I asked her. Just then she took me by the wrist and pulled me over to her walk-in-wardrobe. She held a dress in her left hand and a pair of shoes that were high-heels in her right ''i thought you could try it on for tomorrow'' the dress was blue (my favorite color) and so were the shoes with diamonds all over them '' OH MY DAZE! Alice there amazing thank-you soooo much'' i was so happy right now '' so you like them then'' '' well duh'' i put on the dress with silk of it sliding over my skin. And then the shoes slipped onto my feet. ''wow Alice they are so pretty'' i said as i walked into her on-suit bathroom to look in her mirror.''well you know me''she then walked in after me''yes Alice i do know you and what your like with fashion. you always go over bored'' ''I know but that's why you all love me'' she said''really'' I said under my breath.

hey guys im sorry this chapter was short but hope to do more soon.

Lois xx