Irresolute Divergent
Note: You probably will notice in some chapters I will have said something then put a number in-between two round brackets like this (15). This means that if you look at the book Divergent you will see where I added my character Julisa or other characters I made up such as Biff, Erin, or Meredith. So if I say (15) then if you have a copy of Divergent you can check that page and see where I added her/him. I thought it would be fun this way and a more realistic of adding them to the story, like they are an actual character. Now that you guys know, I hope you enjoy the book. Here's Irresolute Divergent.
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SOMEONE SHOVES my shoulder waking me up from my sleep. I want to roll away from whoever it is but that's impossible to do with the small beds we have. They shove me again, although I don't want to I open my eyes. It takes a while for my eyes to adjust to the sudden blue light but once they do I realize who's shoving me, my mom.
"Everyone's already in the dining hall and you're here sleeping in on the day you get you aptitude test!" She says and sighs "Julisa just get ready the train will be here in twenty."
She tries to fix her hair, which is sticking out in many places. Although she combs though her brunette hair many times it still finds a way to stick out. She gives up soon and ties her hair back with a ruberband around her wrist. She smiles at me then walks out of the small room without another word.
I sit up stretching my arms and legs, almost kicking over my picture in the process. I steady the picture of me and my parents then stand up. I look over my shoulder to the small dresser I have, my mom has lied clothes out for me. I take a few steps closer it's a black dress that shows up a little above my knees. She expects me to jump off a train wearing that? I put the dress to the side and decide to wear it tomorrow to the choosing ceremony. I pick out a more appropriate outfit and slip it on quickly along with my shoes.
I walk out of the little 'house' we have, which isn't really a house it's just an area where you just rest and change. There's no point in anything more than that considering most everyone is out all day and only comes back to sleep and eat. I take the short cut to the dining hall to make sure I'm not late. There's a single dim light hanging in the hallway that probably wouldn't make my hand visible to me even if I wave it in front of my face, but I don't need the light. I have each of these hallways memorized, everywhere they twist and turn to, one day it will come in handy though I don't know when.
I enter the dining hall finding all the black clothed freaks are sitting and talking amongst themselves. Freaks is the best word for them. Everyone in this fraction (In reality every fraction.) is a freak and they know it. The dining hall is packed more than usual due to the fact there serving cake as a "Whoop, you're finding out whether or not you actually belong to the fraction you were born of today. Your whole life could possibly change but here's some chocolate cake!" Although I'm still excited for my cake. I get in line grabbing my regular morning day breakfast and a slice of chocolate cake, then I take a seat next to Biff who's discussing the encounter he had last week with a sassy Erudite.
"Those smart mouth freaks think there better than everyone because they can work a computer." Erin groans before shoving a fork full of cake in her mouth. Biff looks at her with a look clearly stating 'I know right'. They both get into a heated discussion about Erudite and I roll my eyes. Erudite can of course be annoying they always clam to be smarter than everybody (They are but they don't need to know that.) but they think since there smarter that there better, which is of course dead wrong. I don't focus too much on Biff and Erin's conversation but I understand there speaking about the Erudite leader Jeanie. I look down at my watch, the trains going to come in five minutes. I notice other kids are leaving but neither Biff nor Erin notices because of the Erudite discussion. I slap Biffs shoulder and point at my watch.
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Irresoulte Divergent
FanfictionJulisa Clawson has no doubts that she is Dauntless, I mean the simulation tells her so, that means she must be. Well, although the simulation is smart, it is not smart enough to keep up with this girl. Most divergent's know about there Divergence...