bones (pilot)

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Hi guys! Thank you so much for reading this! this is my first story written on here, so if you would please, maybe take the time to comment what you think of it, that would be great! that way i can get better and better at this! Thanks! (this is a re-written kind of take off from the series 'bones'.)

  The airport is loud and busy as i look for my friend coming from guatemala.  i cant find the flight and so I go to the computers that says what flights are when and where. the screen is glitchy and wont work, i try to ask people where it is, as i am in a rush. they just ignore me like i wasn't there. I finally go to a desk clerck and ask him. he is on his computer and shushes me and tellls me to wait."Sir please? I am in a rush to get my friend." he ignoes me. I rip open my coat and flash him my chest. He struggles for a moment and then i hear a load "Angela!!" "there you are!!" I turn aound after buttoning open my coat. my friend is behind me, possibly she was there the whole time. "I'm so sorry, I coulden't find where you got off..." she said " so you flashed the desk clerck to get him to tell you... oh nothing about you has changed since i was gone, same old Angela." i say " haha swetie, how was guatemala?" "boring?" "Hot?" "miserable?" "No no no! It was wonderful! there were a few bad cases there but that was fine." "One of them was a boy, about six, was hung on a tree and stabbed to death, he got killed and stabbed before being hung." "umm wow... sounds... fun?" "Yes it was, just not that part, we found the murderer though!" "oh thats good." my freind turns around and yells at the guy behind us. "WHY ARE YOU FOLLOWING US?! TELL ME NOW OR ELSE YOU WILL REGRET IT" he trys to run, my friend Temprence, or other known as Dr. Brennan, kicks him in the stomach, and stoms on his foot, bangs her elbow on the back of his neck, and twists him arm backwards so he is on the floor. "Im sorry, I'm just sucurity!!" "Hands up" two cops point their guns at me. "He was following us." she says. "what is she in charge now!?" says the sucurity man.

   "put down your weapons" he says to the cops. "hand over the bag" he says to Temprence. "is this what this is all about!?" she says. She proudly hands him the bag, wich when he looks inside, drops it. "I thought you wouldent like that". she says. pulling a dirty human skull out of the bag and then putting it back.

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