kaysoooooooo, i don't really know why i thought of doing this,
i guess i just thought this would be a good idea and i like editing
i know my own story doesn't have good editing but
im actually a great editor:)
comment below if you would like me to edit your story
and i'll give you my email address, so you can email the chapter
to me then, then i'll send it back, ready for you to post