A young girl who loves to swim and have sleepovers with her friends, a young girl who likes to eat,a young girl who likes to read books and a young girl who likes to is having fun one night at her friend Poppy's house and their friend Valentina disa...
(Holzie) Here, it stops here! Right at this tree. (Jordan) Is it just me or is there something written On The tree. (Lucy) Yeah there is, does it say V+S (Holzie) Let's rub all of the moss of tee tree so we can actually see what it says. 10 minuets later (Poppy) OMG! It does say V+S! (Jordan) But who is S? (Holzie) Well what boy has an S that we know off? (Lucy) Well... here is Sam in my form class, Sean in my Maths, Simon who is in my English, Samual in my social subjects. (Holzie) There is... Simon in my PE class he is a different Simon, Steven in my music class, Scott in my Maths and Religious studies class. (Jordan) I only know Steven, Simon and Scott! (Poppy) Well I am sure there is a Stuart in someone's form class, I don't know who he is but I am sure Valentina knows who he was. (Jordan) Umm, well I know who he is, Valentina showed me him once at a party. (Poppy) What party? (Holzie and Lucy) Yeah! What party! (Jordan) Well Valentina took me to a party, there was only two tickets and she could only choose one person, it was either me or Lucy she decided to pick me because I invited her over for a sleepover but none of you could come because you were all busy, she gave me the ticket after dinner, so we went to the party and she introduced me to Stuart, I didn't really like him he was always around young girls someone not the same age as him he was always around this one girl, I am sure she was called Lara McDonald, she was about maybe 4 or 5 years younger than him but he was always and I mean always around younger girls, sorry that I didn't tell you about the party! (Poppy) It's fine you deserved to go to the party but just tell me one thing did anyone get hurt at the party and Stuart could have done something to someone? (Jordan) Umm, let me think back! Start of flashback Just for quickness V=Valentina J=Jordan (V) Come on Jordan we should leave now. (J) Ok let's go today was a good night thanks for taking me here Valentina! (V) Wait, give a second I am just going upstairs to go to the toilet! (J) Ok I will wait right here. (Jordan's thoughts) Ahhhh! Someone screamed, it was a young girl probably about the same age as me and Valentina. She was lying at the bottom of the stairs looking a little like this...
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Everyone who was at the party gathered round, Stuart the boy that Valentina introduced me to was standing at the top of the staircase sniggering at the girl along with his friends, it looked like they were the ones to kill that young girl, I turned around to say " should we phone an ambulance?" To Valentina but she was gone, I looked around everywhere then I went upstairs there she was standing or should I say cuddling up to Stuart. End of flashback (Poppy) Do you think it was Stuart that killed the girl? (Jordan) I am not sure all I remember was Valentina and I were just about to leave but she went upstairs to go to the toilet as soon as she went upstairs the girl fell down the stairs! (Lucy) Did Valentina like Stuart or not? (Jordan) I think she likes him because she kept on waving at him when he turned around and she was always offering him food and drink so I would probably say Yes! The girl who died was also around Stuart the same way as Valentina (Holzie) Do you think... ~~~~~~~~~ Hey guys hope you enjoyed this part! I am really sorry that I haven't been writing in my stories for a long time but I will try and write in them all soon! How do you think the girl died? Do you think someone pushed her or she just fell? What do you think Holzie, Poppy, Jordan and Lucy are thinking what happened? See you in the next part Xx