the camera now slowly pans over to abby trying to close the elevator.
abby now was in the elevator.
the interior of the elevator was a complete black walls with red tinted lighting.
she now pushed a button on the elevator button display.
it was labled abby's parking spot.
she now stands a few mintues,
abby now looked around her
she felt extremly cold a/c from the elevator.
She shivered and her teeth was chattering loudly.
The elevator interior symbolizes her cold dark heart.
she sees the elevator doors open.
she stepped out of the elvator and saw a endless corridor that is all black without any light source.
she feels a warm hot feeling in her stomach.
abby now felt her bookbag was almost falling off her shoulder,
she swung it back on top of her shoulder.
abby raised her arm and looked down at her iwatch.
She hears Paul Williams voice singing in her head,
Has the world begun to rise to a storm
With a whisper of the wind that's begun to blow
Doesn't anybody know
Where does it end
It syncs with Abby trying to cry but not to while painfully trying to drown out her visual flashbacks of her boyfriend dean smiling and laughing at her,
She felt extreme anger and sadness as she frowned as she heard the verse.
One last time I'll be a part of you
Until our feelings have a taste
And when my time is through
Whatever becomes of you
Never let a feeling go to waste
As she heard the verse playing in her subconscious,
She automatically gets more visual flashbacks of her boyfriend and screaming loudly to drown the sound of her boyfriend's voice.
Abby closed her eyes and fully absorbed into her daydream.
(Fade in dream sequence)
She's in a cold, dark night with a cup of coffee on the nightstand.
She sees dean sitting on the couch,
Abby hugged him with silence And then he slowly whisper to her ear that She is loved and then finally abby look dean in the eye and smile at her and kiss her in cheek or forehead while smiling and touch her hair gently and let her sleep in peace in dean's arm.
She hears Paul Williams song touch playing in the background,
Touch, touch
I remember touch
Touch, touch
I remember touch
Where do I belong?
Touch, I need something more
I remember touch
I need something more in my mind
As the verse plays in sync,
Abby felt the air from her nose hit dean's neck and flow down his chest as she leans on him.
Abby now hears the verse
Touch, I remember touch
Pictures came with touch
A painter in my mind
Tell me what you see
As she heard the verse loud and clear
The verse symbolizes There used to be that sense of touch, of realness attached to the visual flashbacks in her memories.
She remembers touch, and how it was connected to all the other images in her memories that are now coming back to her.
They were seemingly slipping away until this moment.
A tourist in a dream
A visitor it seems
The verse symbolizes that more that the situation she's found herself in isn't one she's used to/is possibly better than usual.
A half-forgotten song
Where do I belong?
Tell me what you see
I need something more
As she hears the verse playing,
She automatically smiled and cried.
She croons of forgetting how to feel about this renewed sensation of touch.
She begs the question of her mind to make sense of the emotion as she struggles with processing it all.
Dean's hair stands up, abby shivered and she looks up in his eyes.
Dean sees the luminous shine from her deep sea of colored iris.
They began to kiss.
Abby began to gently touch dean's cheek and spread her lips open,
She puts them on top of dean's lips.
Her mouth was drooling and salvia dripping from her lips,
Abby was extremely excited to kiss dean.
she could suddenly feel his lips capturing hers, the taste of his kiss filling her with lightness and joy.
as the gentle pressure engulfed her, she could feel as his hands continued to stroke either side of her face.
without thinking of what she was doing, she allowed her lips to part and felt the kiss intensify.
Dean gave her a passionate french kiss on the lips,
a shiver of ecstasy ran though Abby's body like a static shock.
Abby gave a smug grin as after dean kissed her.
it was clear that right at that moment her body was, by its own admission, craving more of his loving attention.
they remained in this stance for several moments, the kiss sweet, but somewhat timid.
He touched her lips, which were now red and a little swollen from the loving kisses they had shared.
Abby hears Paul's voice singing the verse,
Kiss, suddenly alive
Happiness arrive
Hunger like a storm
How do I begin?
The lyrics symbolizes that after her kiss,Abby's emotions are awakened and she asks her mind a new question when hearing the verse how do I begin?
She's overcome with emotion in comparison to the early absence of it.
She smiles and finally embraces him as her quakes come to a rest and she feel a light flickering in her.
She hears Paul Williams singing the verse,
A room within a room
A door behind a door
Touch, where do you lead?
the significance of these lyrics appears to be building off of the idea that she is exploring her own consciousness and feelings, yet no matter how deeply she searched, she never appear to get anywhere and don't know where she is going.
Abby now looks at dean with a smile
She hears the verse,
I need something more
Tell me what you see
I need something more
It syncs with Abby crying tears of joy.
Dean now gives her sweet short kisses on her neck,
Abby giggled.
She hears a child choir singing,
If love is the answer, you're home
Hold on
If love is the answer, you're home
Hold on
If love is the answer, you're home
Hold on
If love is the answer, you're home
It syncs with Abby feeling really happy as she closely listened to the song.
The lush arrangement of the bridge and final refrain are meant to evoke in the listener the same intense feelings being had by Paul Williams, as the music swells, the enriching vocals rise, and the emotional lines are repeated with increasing fervor. It appears that this is Paul's voice responding to her.
This is the answer Abby's been seeking.
Abby knows Love is something we all need, and if love is what she felt, going with it and embraced that feeling.
This is how to process touch for her.
Then suddenly She catches a wind a big fwomph goes through her.
Abby is warmed for a second.
All the sudden a cold wind brushes past her arms and she began to not open her eyes.
She began to wrap her arms around him and he shuffles in more closely.
Abby's body crumpled to the ground and she held her knees to her chest like a scared child.
She softly rocked back and forth as gentle sobs came from her mouth.
a thin line of water rolled across her face following a tear.
Dean wiped Abby's tears away,kissed her on the forehead.
his touch which abby craved made her feel comforted and relaxed
Abby's lip trembled as she stared at dean and let the teardrops fall.
it remained quiet for a few more minutes as they held each other tight.
she didn't fight back, or want to resist what was happening,
now both of their eyes were filled with forming nonstopping tears and let the remaining tears drop down their cheeks.
She hears the verse playing the background,
Touch, sweet touch
You've given me too much to feel
It syncs with Abby screaming and crying while trying hold on to dean.
The verse symbolizes that her dream is almost too intimate, to the point that it causes distress or can feel overwhelming, both physically and emotionally for her.
She is in emotional shambles,never wanting to let go.
As she grasped tighter,she started to feel herself.
She finally open her eyes and see she have had part of her jacket on wrapped around her arms.
Nothing is there;
Abby is seeing only the darkness and a single tear swells up in her eyelid and streaming down her cheek,
Her lips that curl to make a frown.
Abby now hears Paul's voice singing in a very echoing way,
Sweet touch
You've almost convinced me I'm real
I need something more
I need something more
The previous verses detail that "if love is the answer" Abby receives while searching for that "something more," Abby found what she have been missing and longing to feel.
Having now discovered this loving "touch,"
Abby is overwhelmed and nearly made to feel complete with dean.
Paul Williams sung of how Abby looked and looked and searched for love but still doesn't find the answer.
And she still needs something more from touch. Anything more.
Abby chose The song touch because she feels lost and that she experiences touch and that is a good thing, but she needs something more.
The song ends with a diminished or augmented chord to show that there will never be a resolution.
As she heard Paul's voice disappeared from her head and now hears silence.
Her fists balled up and violently punched herself in the stomach,
She spew out a little blood out from her mouth.
The blood slowly dripped from her lips and Abby saw a remain of it spatter in her hand,
She wiped it away from her mouth while having a loud pained uncomfortable sigh.
She felt totally numb and in pain as she felt extreme anger and deep sadness,agony all at once,
the camera slowly zooms into her eyes filled with extreme pain,surprise,horror.
the silence,intense ambient music and the metronome-like visual beat that this scene will have to create a sense of tension and intrigue and suspense.
She still felt anguish from her self harm.
abby now sighed.
abby now sees a bright red large car.
she feels empty and sadness.
abby now looks down at her feet.
she now gets her keys out of her jeans pocket.
the key was shaped like a red metal shaped knife.
abby now opens the door and went inside the car.
the car had red interior read interior seating.
she adjusts the mirror and puts her key in the ingition.
the car turns on.
abby now drove to the dark corridor and disappeared from sight.
abby now sees a large door located at one of the corridor walls.
it was a large rectangle red door.
abby sees it open to the outside of the parking garage.
she stops the car then turns it back on as abby now sees the door closing behind the car.
abby is now driving to her high school Riley and speeding away into the sunset.
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Abby
ChickLitA dark haunting past comes back to haunt Abby Crothers Abby tries to forget her past lover Don't forget to leave reviews if you liked the story I Would greatly appreciate it if you do write a review of the story I hope you enjoy reading my story ...