Super Friends

This my first story so please  tell me if I should continue or change idea

Well he my name is Elvin I'm as normal as any super powered 16 year old boy. Yea I said superpower I wasn't born like this it was because of a stupid outer space flower.

So me and my friends where walking through the woods to have picnic you know normal stuff when my friend nikky saw something fall from the sky. Well to tell u more about nikki shes tall and skinny like a model with.blond hair and blue eyes and she a swimming champ so she has nice body.

Well when we all look up there it was a flying piece of rock but it we got scare when secounds later we heard a "KA BOOM" well I told them being me " hey let check it out see how big a hole it left". That whenkimberly said " hell no do uou think im gonna go check that out not even if I was paid.

Well Kimberly is like you normal people call drama queen but could easily be won over by one thing. "Hey Kimmy if you go we will go shopping" said nikki. Nikki hate shopping but no matter is she did she was.as curious as me so me and my three friends went to the meteoroid hole.

It was not a big hole but it looked wierd it was four flowers.

Yes I did said four. Well Adolfo was the first one who said" let each get one who else would have a space flour" worst Idea ever. Adolfo is our crazy spunt guy he tall nice tall and brownish her with perfect emerald green eyes a Lady's man if it wasn't for his attitude.

well that is when all the crazy stuff started to happen.

Hey weren't the only one there let us all have a say in it. Let the story continue why do you always have to be in control. Well ok all.could say the story.

Well plzz coment and tell me is it gud or should I stop. Plzz tell me like I said first time doing dis.

If I get a gud review and you guys like it at least a some of you I could put up when i have the time