I made this story when I had bad grammar, knew nothing about Naruto, and was a horrible writer in all. This story is basically the worst in my opinion. Kiname was a mistake, the OC is indefinitely stupid to be a Jounin with no skill at all, and she wears a hood for what reason? Just because she's beautiful. Pfft, what a whore.
I won't delete this story, but just leave it here for people to face palm to. Over usage of words annoy me, and right now my story is annoying me. I have no time to edit this since it won't change the fact that it is a complete disappointment.
Sincere apologies to people who expects updates and others who want decent stories.
Check out this story: "The Flower That Will Someday Wilt" by ThatRandomLoveStory- (book cover to the side)
Sure, it's not that great but it's surely decent enough to have a character that isn't cold all the time.
Bye.
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Loneliness That Was Once Shared ( Gaara Love Conflict )
ФанфикShe is loved by everyone, all the boys go crazy for her but her heart is only set on one. He is lonely and everyone avoids him. The boys who fall for her is chased by girls while her heart is with the boy who is hated by them.