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FIRST LOOK
The sun slowly rose, bringing beams of light with it. I managed to see through the mist of the coldness of the night before. I saw the familiar building, which was
my home. My new home. By the way, I'm a Vampire Hunter, my mother and father went missing a few months ago from a hunting trip across the state, and were
found in a dumpster close to my new home.
Other hunters mostly stay in a building together, but thats because they hunt by their selves. Its hard to explain. Some hunters are born into this world,to hunt.
Some are born and then it becomes naturally to them. The ones that it becomes naturally to, they are born to humans and when they turn sixteen their power
fully emerges, The ones who are born, exactly for this reason, have a Vampire Hunter family and they too, get their powers at sixteen. I do have a hunter family,
well i did. I still have my brother, hes a year older then me, and when our parents died he took off, leaving me here, in Brooklyn, by myself. My powers fully
emerged a few months before my parents died. I'm nearly seventeen, my brother Felix turned eighteen today. So, therefore, i have a reason to be pissed, while
he goes and gets pissed and celebrates his birthday, I'm stuck here, family less.
The bulilding gets clearer as i get closer. It looks very modern, like its been recently built. i reach the pebble like path and stop, take a deep breath and slowly
regain my speed toward the building. I grip onto the bag straps and squeeze. I push the double doors poen and slowly take in the Jasmine scent, most of the
furniture in this foyer is white, bright white. With a centre table in the middle of the room, marble white tiles, white chairs along the walls, a front desk with a
slight bit of wood on the edges. Then a grand set of slightly spiral stairs, one on each side of the front desk.
"May i help you, dear?" Came a sweet, musical voice. i turned my head and found a woman at the front desk, looking at me curiously.
"I'm Madeline Fray." hoping that was enough information. Understanding crossed her face.
"Of course, we've been expecting you. Just let me make this phone call to your new mentor." Her voice echoeing through the foyer as she starting dialing
numbers on her phone. I slowly walked toward the desk and once i reached it the lady was finished speaking on the phone.
"Sorry, i didn't introduce myself. I'm Richelle Alley. We've have been very excited to meet you, Madeline." She smiled showing her perfect white teeth. i smiled back at her.
"Call me Mimi, i barely use my full name." I replied while shaking her hand over the desk. A male figure came down the left stairs and his face pulled back into a
smile. He turned toward richelle once he was down the stairs.
"Is this Madeline?" he asked her excitedly. he was wearing nearly all black, probably just back from hunting all night. Richelle nodded once at him, then he faced
me. He had bronze hair and beautiful chocolate brown eyes. He extended his hand toward me. I reached out and toke his hand and shook it once. he was a
decent six feet tall. he made me feel even smaller than i was, my head wasn't even up to his shoulder. i went up on my tip toes to look a little taller but he already
