Confession

plot of the story

Rapist is luring victim 1 bit when he gets back to his place, he finds victim 2 who accidently went in. He dismissed his first prey and went after the other one throughout the days. The girl knew what he was doing because of victim 1 as her friend and moved to the opposite house her own to make it confusing. But she was still caught. A month had past and the guy was still determined to trap her. Girls was going to give up and went to his place finding him not there. She decided to have a look around for anything that could be useful. She found some files after. "Some ended up being a whole load." Don't what that means. Next to them were 1pense coins and 2 pense coins(English currency). She looked into one of the files and found a picture of a girl, info of her, some sort of case then a stamp saying "complete and destroyed." She looked through other things and found a news article of a missing family with another paper saying "still missing and won't be coming because I listened to my dad." She looked at the article especially the family picture- a boy cicled with "found but won't come out cuz of dad." Victim 2 wanted to know everything about it so she tried to lure him into talking while he lured her into him. One day she fell into his trap but before he could do anything , she ran and asked the question directly to him of who everyone in files and artlces was.he didn't answer but looked really ashamed and said for her to leave. For the next couple of weeks she didn't see not hear from from him but on a specific day she was going to school and on her way, he was there. He and she both approached each other calmly. She squeezed her arms around him because she preferred to have his huanting presence than having no one to talk to. Right then and there he confessed to her who he is and who the article was about. He told her about him working for his father and what each girl was to do and specific info they had. The girls were victims for Bruno's dad and his dad told him to kill and to torture so no one knew who his boss/dad was but him. His dad had killed the whole family except for Bruno for cover. Now his dad has ordered him to kill Atlantia but Bruno is in love with his victim and doesbt know if he should go against his dad or his love. His blood or love?

That's what I have so far but I really need some more for it and I need this to be an actual story. You have seen it has taken me a year just to write 8 parts to my other story and I know if I can partner up with someone it would be more quicker. Please if you have any details or additions you want to put in then tell me. Also of you have an idea for the characters' looks, I have someone on it, but I would like multiple ways of them. Not that I won't like yours RubexyStar, I know you'll do a good job. I just need a range. Plz! I really want this to be a nice "little" story  to explore into. As you can tell I'm over worrying about it😣