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A girl slipped on a banana peel and  fell down a flight of stairs.

At the end of the bumpy road, she encountered a light.

"Who are you?" Asked she, skeptical of this blindingly golden man. The golden man only smiled.

"I am god, and I am responsible for your death."

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Yan Jiahui abruptly closed her phone, taking in a deep breath.

Then, after calming her raging emotions, she began to read again.

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"I, I, I died?" The girl stuttered, staring tearfully up at the golden man. The golden man smiled sadly, and offered her a hand. "I died, from... from slipping on a banana?"

The man nodded, a hint of guilt in his sad smile. "I was eating a banana, and I threw it carelessly. That banana peel stumbled upon your path, and you died because of me."

The girl took his hand and stood up. She hung her head low, looking quite dejected. The man felt an immense amount of guilt, and after a short while, he continued. "However, I can..."

"What can you do?" Immediately, the girl's head snapped back up to meet the man's eyes. She then grasped the man's hands close to her chest. "You'll bring me back, right? Right? You're a god after all, please bring me back!"

The god shook his head ruefully. "I can't mess with the balance of the worlds. However, we are in dire need of someone to help repair the other worlds. If you help me with this, then I'll see what I can do."

The girl nodded, excitement and hope on her youthful face. "I agree!" She cried out happily, and the god smiled.

"Then, it's a deal."

~end of chapter 1~

~to be continued~

-last updated 24-10-2007-
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.....What the fuck! I opened my pants and this is what you show me?

Yan Jiahui felt really, really wronged. She was so excited too!

That last updated 24-10-2007, it has been 11 years since it last updated!!! It was a good start too!!

However, Yan Jiahui couldn't help but subconsciously rank the story contents, even though it was only one chapter.

Main Character's IQ.... 3/10.

Mystery....6/10.

Plot.....too overused, but still good. 6/10.

Grammar....pretty good. 6/10

Update time? Negative endless nines! 囧

She started to analyse it as well. From the first chapter, this "god"'s deviousness could be seen a mile away. It was obvious that this guy was planning for her death! What kind of author would use slipping as a banana as a death, so this must be a ploy!

Plus, how can the main character agree so easily? So stupid! Even if it's a BG novel, the MC shouldn't be so stupid....

She felt really, really unsatisfied. However, just as she was about to try to search for another story, she was called by her manager.

"Joy! Come here! We'll start shooting the movie soon!"

With a sigh, Yan Jiahui set down her phone. After scrutinising herself in the mirror, she felt that her appearance was quite fine, and then left the dressing room.

Time to work.

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Yan JiaHui, young miss of the music-oriented Yan family. At age 12, she earned countless awards for her skills at the chinese zither, and age 15, she debuted as an actress with the support of her family.