Avneil silent love

Shot 1

Hi.........

Hey...  how r u alll....this is my new story.... hope u all will like my new TS
ok lets stert the first shot ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺

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story start with a boy walking in a road and he carrying some books. its clear that he is a student. umm collage student.. suddenly his friend call him

F:NEIL neil neil
(yes he is none of other then our neil)

Neil: kya hai tare wajha se shanti se road pe chall bhi nahi sakta kya....had hai yaar ali

Ali:Kya maine kya kia??????

N:kuch nahi

A: kya hua?  itna bharka hua kyu hai

N:nahi yaar ajj mood bohot kharab hai

Ali : accha chal collage chalte hai warna usss kharus sai daat paregi

N:hmm chal

He was about to go but his eyes stuck on a girl....A girl who is the most beautiful girl which he ever seen in his entire life..her eyes is very beautiful but it seems like in this eyes have a lots of pain her eyes is deep like a ocean her eyes is deep black colure  . Her lips is just perfect and its baby pink colure and looks so soft.. her skin is so smooth and soft. she is like a angel for neil...... neil is lost in her beauty and his own world... his thought broken by ali.

Ali:Kya hua neil chal na yaar

N:udhar dakh

A:kya??

N:are gadha (donkey)  uss larki ko dakh

A:konsi larki

N:who samne wali

he poiting his finger on that girl..  ali see that girl and says

What neil wait kahi tujhe who pasand to nahi na

N:who bohot khubsurat hai yaar she is soo awesome.  I can't distribute her beauty with words. .

A:oye hoi love at first sight haaa

N:kya yaar chal uske pass jate hai

A:hmmmm

They Walk to that girl and suddenly a girl run behind that girl and calld that girl
AVNI! AVNI!

N:to iska naam avni hai

Ali:naam to bara pyara hai
Then that girl came to avni and said something to her then she just nodded.. that girl stert talking like hell..... but avni just nodded and  stook her head which is not unnoticed by neil

N:yeh kuch bol kyu nahi rahi... I think thori kam baat karti hai hogi.. per koI nahi mai isse apne jaisa bana dunga

Again his thought broke by ali

Ali : kya yaar usse baat nahi kerni
then he saw that girl friends bought her with them and avni is alone
then neil go to her

N :hi I M neil.... I know u r avni...

A:...........

N:yes and I went to be ur friend.. will u be my friend?????

avni just smile and leave from there.....

N:yeh kya tha atleast ans to ker dati
ok phir kabhi na kabhi to mioegi

And he leave from there
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Ummm a long chapter 500 words

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