Idk but the reviewer did a trolling attempt that was anything but. I mean he gave valid criticism without being rude. For some odd reason if you view it on the basic version of FF the formatting is fucked up but regular mobile version is a ok. The other thing he brought up was how long my first chapter was. For one he said it was 2000 words when it was more like 1500. He was upset that the fire chapter was that long without to much significant plot. For some reason having your deck lit on fire wasn't significant to him. Anyway this was probably one of the comments I kept in mind the most. But here's the thing. This was the beginning of a spiral of comments that is continuing right now. And there is something behind the scenes that I don't know about. Oh well better call me Shuichi Saihara cuz I'm gonna figure out what it is.
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the best soap opera in the history of fanfiction.net?
Non-FictionSo I was on fanfiction.net occasionally starting stories but never getting to far into them. And then this happened.
