To everyone who still reads and likes this story, thank you. The whole reason for this rant is because I regret writing what I did. I cringed when writing the part about Tobey and Becky.....doing...it and I feel like it wasn't the tone I wanted to set for this fanfic.
Then there is Jackie who is essentially like me but as a character but with superpowers. How do you guys feel about her? Please let me know in the comments. I feel like I have failed you as an author and that is why nobody on fan fiction or anywhere is really commenting anymore. I keep coming out with bad chapters and we haven't met all 7 sins yet.
I thought this was going to be better written but it falls flat compared to the first fanfic. I wrote these stories because I wanted to take a children's show, age up the characters and write them in more mature situations. Also because I hardcore ship Tobey and Becky. I can't get better at writing if I don't know what it is I'm bad at when it comes to writing.
This fanfic has never gotten a negative review and I feel like this is affecting the writing overall. I will continue to write chapters I just don't know if I deserve to post them. Please....tell me what I am doing wrong and I can make it better. I'm bad at telling when my writing sucks and I erase it if I don't like it.
I love you guys but the lack of reviews doesn't make me want to update. I used to not care if only one person read it but now no one seems to be reading it. Am I being a bad author? Let me know because I can't truly tell. I think I am not going to write a third installment of this because I am going to combine the third one with this one. No more boring chapters...just chapters having to do with the actual plot of the story. We are going to visit Lexicon and visit the planet where all 7 deadly sins come from. Will there be battles? Perhaps.....
Is Becky with child? We'll just have to wait and see. Thank you for reading and see you in the next chapter. Hopefully a much much longer one because I have been slacking for far too long.
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Word Girl and the 7 Deadly sins
FanfictionThis is a Sequel to Word Girl and the Growing Envy. Becky Botsford, Jackie Winchester and Tobey MCcallister go on a road trip with Jackie's uncle Sam Winchester to find the rest of Jackie's family the 6 other deadly sins. Are they evil? Will they li...