I wish you were here

the beginning

]Hello people that are reading this for my new and first fan fiction. My writing skills are very basic but I hope to become more skilled. And can you tell me what I did good and bad in the comments so I know what to change.
So let's go!!
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This day stared like a normal one. Me and my friends Heon woo, and Jayla where getting ready to go to the first BTS concert in Charalote! We got front row seat tickets and a fan signing because we know the workers there. But first we went to Kabuto to get some food first.
When we got settled we saw people, seven of them, that look exactly like BTS.
Jayla: "I think I see something that you will like." As she pulls me up and walks over to them at the table.

When we got over to them, they staired at our clothing and back to our faces. Jayla is the first to talk as always.
Jayla:"you guys look li-"
Rap Monster:" B.T.S am I right?"
I just good there shook before Jayla nudged my arm to talk since she can't speak Korean.
Y/N:"Annyeong haseyo."
Jungkook:" you don't have to do that." He said with a Sly smile.
Jungkook:" you look very young. Aren't you supposed to be in school?"
Y/N:" No. I graduated college when I was 15 at a fashion designing College.
Jungkook:" So how old are you now?"
Y/N: "16. I went early."
Jungkook: " so I guess you were going to our concert?"
Jayla: "Well him too." As she signals Heon woo to come over to us.
Heon woo: " hello I'm Heon woo I'm a huge fanboy!" We all laugh!😂
Suga: "Can I see some of your clothing you made?"
Y/N: "Sure." I walk over to him a and show my photos of all the clothing I made.

He had a very surprised .

and inserted look on his face.
Suga: " This is very good. I like the style of your looks, so different and unique!" He said with a huge smile on his face.
Y/N: " I'm glad you like them!"
Suga: "theirs  a opening for a new deisner in Big Hit. Do you want to work there then?"
I stood there, stunned, happy, and Shook at the same time. They looked at suga and me. I got too embarrassed to just stand there so I walked over to our table with Jayla and Heon woo following me.
Heon woo: " Are you ok?"
Y/N: " Of course  this is the first step to my dream. But..."
Jayla: " But?" As they look at me in confusion.
Y/N: " But where will i stay? And I will have to quit my job at hot topic.. my..my.. heaven! And you guys know what happens when I'm with asians I must smile!"
Heon woo: "Well you got over that when you met me right?"
Y/N: "let's just eat ok?"
Jayla+Heon woo: "okay."
We ate food fast. As we were almost done Jimin came and told me to give his card to an employee to go to the dressing room there.
Y/N: " Thanks."
Jimin: " Well see you there." As he blows a kiss and leaves with the others.
Jayla: " You guys ready to go?"
Y/N+Heon woo: "Yes!"

THE CONCERT
When we walked in there are many people here ready to see BTS. It felt we were in a Black Friday sale or the Chick-fil-A line.

Heon woo: "Y/N you can go we will be looking at merch okay. See you soon!"
Y/N: " Bye Heon woo, bye Anti( Jayla).
Jayla: " Bye Miss. Korea!"
As they wave goodbye, I walk over to one of the employees and show them the card.
Employee: " Right this way."
Y/N: " Thank you for knowing de wey." (See what I just did there)

We walk past lots of people moving fast to get to their seats. We walk past lots of corridors and a accommodations for people that get VIP lounges to hang out. In about 10 minutes we reach the dressing room.
Y/N: " Thank you very much."
Employee:" you're welcome have a good time."

I walk into the room with J-hope there to great me.

J-hope: " Hello Y/N right this way to Mrs. Do! "
As he pulls me by the wrist  very securely all the way to the dressing room.

J-hope: " Mrs. Do Y/N is here!"
When he said that I froze thinking what do I say to this woman. To my future boss! I think I'm just going to improve.😂
Mrs. Do: " Hello I'm Mrs. Do the head designer for BTS and big hits. I hear that you are a very talented young girl like me back in the day."
Y/N: " Hello and thank you for the offer. This is the first step to my dream!"
Mrs. Do: " Well we will read over the contract after the show, okay?"
Y/N: " Yes, and thanks again for the offer. Bye!"
Mrs. Do: " Oh, Miss would you like to stay behind stage and watch the preparation for the performance?"
Y/N: " I wish but no I came with my friends and I want to stay with them." I say shyly
Mrs. Do: "Okay that's fine well I'll let you go."

When I reach the door I feel a hand touch my shoulder.  I jumped in shock.
V: " Oh... I'm dident mean to scare you. Sagwa deuryeoyo( I do apologize).
Y/N: " It's okay."
V: " So we made a plan on who you are going to be roommates with since you're too young to get an apartment, and you will be with Namjoon  hyung okay~?"
Y/N : " Ok by-"
V : " Wait I forgot this it has our phone numbers on it."
Y/N: " Thanks, goodbye now!"

That's the end of the chapter I hope you guys like it. Bye now👐👐👐👐